I'm french. Not an excuse but a fact. I will correct ALL THE MISTAKES after the vote. Sorry. DO NOT USE "WEB (IMPROVED)" TO RATE THE GAME, THE ORIGINAL VERSION IS "WEB".
Not really finished, but I had to submit something this time. For the 1000 :)
There isn't really an ending right now. Doesn't work :( Maybe after the vote ?
This story is inspired by the life of Marceline Loridan-Ivens. An awsome woman.
LEFT/RIGHT : Move UP : Look at LETTERS : Answer the questions
Hope you'll enjoy it a bit.
* Edit : I'd added the source, but it's an improved version (I forget to keep an old version of it.)
"Happy birds were singing all around" ^^ The game is weird (in my mind, it means : good). You found a great way to tell a story. Of course, it lacks some polish but I was genuinely happy to play ot
Pretty dark (in the story), needs polish but... wahhh ! It makes feel different. Unusual story for a game coupled with innovative story telling makes this game a very refreshing experience. Thanks for that, good job there.
Challenge completed ! It was hard to see if I answered right or wrong (but is there right or wrong answer really here ?), but I tried again to test different answers: we strongly feel the mood of the character, that's very well done.
Thanks all ! I'm currently working on an improved version of the game (I will release it on Kongregate I think). It's WIP here : http://serv003.pitoum.net/worldofmarceline/
My first thought was, "I'm a slightly less androgynous David Bowie!" It didn't take long for that to pass. I'd love to see you do a little more with this. It's already a very deep and moving experience, a little polish would make it powerful indeed.
This was a great take on the theme, and it's good to see games that aren't just games. It would be nice to see this explored a little further, but the post compo version doesn't seem to load for me.
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The game is weird (in my mind, it means : good). You found a great way to tell a story. Of course, it lacks some polish but I was genuinely happy to play ot
Just a bit experimental like i love.
I'm working right now to improve it (and correct all the mistakes :$).
Unusual story for a game coupled with innovative story telling makes this game a very refreshing experience.
Thanks for that, good job there.
It was hard to see if I answered right or wrong (but is there right or wrong answer really here ?), but I tried again to test different answers: we strongly feel the mood of the character, that's very well done.
I'm currently working on an improved version of the game (I will release it on Kongregate I think).
It's WIP here : http://serv003.pitoum.net/worldofmarceline/
@ilo : Yeah no fun I give you that :)
@racarate : I didn't have the time to add music. Now there is but i'm not sure it's a good thing :)
@Jack : Hope you'll like the new stuff !
@Fred : Not really a good way right now. It'll be a few different endings though.
It didn't take long for that to pass. I'd love to see you do a little more with this. It's already a very deep and moving experience, a little polish would make it powerful indeed.
I like the approach to tell the story. I'm not sure whether you can wake up though.