Tiny Garden of Hope

Overall★★★★★★★★★★3.50
Fun★★★★★★★★★★2.88
Innovation★★★★★★★★★★3.41
Theme★★★★★★★★★★3.83
Graphics★★★★★★★★★★3.66
Audio★★★★★★★★★★3.77
Humor★★★★★★★★★★2.66
Mood★★★★★★★★★★3.95
Coolness★★★★★★★★★★55%
What will you do when you are the last robot in the world and land on a tiny square planet? Can you save yourself and the world by turning it into a beautiful garden?

Use spacebar, and right and left mouse button.
Esc to exit.

The game takes about 5 minutes or less to complete.

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For my very first game jam/compo thingie thing I'm pretty happy with the result! ^_^

Made with GameMaker, Photoshop, Illustrator, Aviary, AVS Audio Editor, and bfxr.
All assets were created in the 48 hour period. 25 hours development time.

Comments39

steamgirl
steamgirlauthor23 Apr 2012, 01:17
Argh.. that was supposed to be "planet" not plant. >.<
cornedor23 Apr 2012, 12:22
This is a very nice game :D. I realy like the mood.
Tifu
Tifu23 Apr 2012, 13:32
Nice game! Good atmosphere.
10WonXero1023 Apr 2012, 13:36
Surreal, emotional journey of a robot that finds companionship with plants on a tiny square planet.

Nice work! Very original.
bms23 Apr 2012, 13:53
quite nice game, music, graphics, mood all really well done. but i must say i sucked at it :D
Suese
Suese23 Apr 2012, 13:53
I played this game to completion. I like that it's a game that has never been made before. I thought it could be improved by having another adversary. Also, the final graphic is so nice, it would have been nice to incorporate it a little more and extend the game play a little while longer.

Thank you for this.
howieV (binarygirl)23 Apr 2012, 18:12
good stuff especially for your 1st entry :) .. good animation/music :) chrome game me a warning about possible malicious download..1st time its ever done that.. im sure it was false positive tho ;p
steamgirl
steamgirlauthor23 Apr 2012, 22:32
Thanks for your comments everyone. ^_^ It's really nice to hear what you made of it, and what you liked and disliked.

@howieV (binarygirl)
Oops! It might be because it's an .exe? I think internet explorer used to automatically block .exe's. XD
nihilocrat
nihilocrat25 Apr 2012, 01:34
Neat! I like the idea of tiny-world gardening games.
Jeffalisk
Jeffalisk25 Apr 2012, 16:08
Really liked the music and the mood, and the robot's little comments: "Good thing I have plenty of spacebars", heh :)

Might have worked a bit better with keyboard controls for everything, especially walking. But that's only a minor thing. Enjoyed this.
omaha25 Apr 2012, 17:50
Very cool and different. Love the gardening concept.
MoltenMustafa
MoltenMustafa26 Apr 2012, 04:11
Hey, neat little game! I like how everything turns all green at the end and how the little robot character talks throughout everything. Nicely don!
Mårten Jonsson28 Apr 2012, 11:27
Ok seriously, I want to play it, and I'l hold of rating until I get it, but what the fuck are you supposed to do? I just keep dying. The weather station does nothing, no matter where I spray water nothing happens?
steamgirl
steamgirlauthor28 Apr 2012, 11:31
Hint: Have you used the right mouse button? ^_~

I can be more specific if you like.
Mårten Jonsson28 Apr 2012, 11:50
Wow do I feel like an idiot... No, I had not tried right-clicking. Obviously way to used playing flash games. How embarrassing.

Anywho, real feedback then:

Loved it! Great atmosphere and idea! I love mood-games, it's the kinds I make myself. Controls should probably have been keyboard based though. And text, such as the values, should not be black if the game's environment is black. Good job, one of my favourites so far.
Jiddo28 Apr 2012, 12:13
Great work! Nice idea, nice implementation, nice graphics and nice game play. A good game across the board. Took me a little while to figure out the controls because I was too stupid to read the instructions.

The game runs nicely on Linux with Wine.
whilefun28 Apr 2012, 15:27
excellent! :D
Shadow
Shadow28 Apr 2012, 19:10
Sweet entry. Loved the graphics, the mood, the music, the humor, game mechanics, everything. Planting seeds needs some explaining though but it's a solid entry. It's definitely one of the few games I've played to completion. Congratulations.
evilseanbot28 Apr 2012, 23:12
Excellent atmosphere.

I felt like the weather station was kind of confusing: I thought by holding the space bar I was getting energy back, when in actuality I had to keep pressing it.

Also, when you die you seem to get some kind of hint, but if the silhouette of the cube is above you its hard to see it.

All in all a delightful game.
4urentertainment29 Apr 2012, 16:19
I really like the idea of this game!

But first a word on the controls and presentation, I really think this game needs to introduce itself better. While I commend your endeavor on trying to make the player figure out the controls as they go, I think the player should be at least told what keys they should use.

I had to read the comments here to figure out I had to use the right click to plant seeds.

With that, this is a really good prototype for 48 hours and I think it has much potential! Here are some ideas:

-Plants having a much wider variety
-More forgiving gameplay, I died when I was almost done filling it all. A very good concept to implement is the easing up of the game exponentially. As you grow more and more plants, things spiral and you find yourself getting much more energy and weather.
-Have the plants you grow unlock further areas.

Imagine as this robot first lands on this tiny planet, he plants the area around him, but a certain tree grows such that it can walk on it and access a new area. This could give the game space for progression and content as the planets continue to unlock new areas in creative ways.

Eventually turning into a very unique adventure game where you adventure not by your wits or your brutality in fighting, but in your love for plants and making things beautiful.

Experiment with plant growing mechanics and this could really be an amazing game.
dr_soda
dr_soda29 Apr 2012, 16:32
The game itself is wonderfuly charming. The art, music, and story are lovely. My criticisms really are more down to control and usability than anything else, so here we go.

When you run out of energy and the help text appears overtop the planet, the fact that it's black text on black background means that it cannot be read. Perhaps a white-colored drop shadow effect would help make the text more legible in this case?

Because I kept dying where the text would be illegible, I died several times before ever getting the clue about where weather comes from.

Years of Flash games have taught me never to click the right mouse button, so even though this is not a Flash game I still am conditioned to ignore its existence. If you're going to have the right mouse button do something critical it's best to call that out.
Scott Baker29 Apr 2012, 20:05
Nice game, I liked it a lot, after I figured out what was going on. I could not figure out what to do at first. Maybe a little more tutorial.

Fits the theme perfectly and really good mood. I really like the personality you gave the character.
tcstyle30 Apr 2012, 07:48
Wow! What a beautiful game. It took me some time to figure out the mechanics. The comments of the robot definitelly helped but could have been said a tad earlier for the impatient.
All in all, if you have some patience, it's just a great small game.
AlwaysGeeky
AlwaysGeeky30 Apr 2012, 14:08
Well done, I really loved this game! great graphics and mood
HeyChinaski
HeyChinaski1 May 2012, 23:14
Great atmosphere, looks awesome and sounds nice too. I would have enjoyed it more if it was a little more complex and longer but still good job!
steamgirl
steamgirlauthor2 May 2012, 18:37
Hey, I just wanted to say I really appreciate all the comments! For those of you whose games I haven't left feedback on yet... I will try to have a look at your games as soon as I humanly can, it's just been a mega busy week!
Adhesion
Adhesion3 May 2012, 01:03
Great concept! Could use to be a bit more intuitive control-wise in the beginning, plus the text color is an issue, otherwise awesome. Music is great too.
Zillix
Zillix3 May 2012, 08:05
Really really pretty. Relaxing gameplay. Great game!
Pierrec4 May 2012, 12:41
I should be dumb because I didn't manage to plant seeds...Morevoer, the arrow buttons didn't work and I played with the mouse. Can't rate yet ^^
CherryNukaCola
CherryNukaCola10 May 2012, 04:10
Wow. Just lovely. Concept's great, mood is nicely done. I found it a little difficult to generate enough energy to keep going. I *am* a sucker for growing games, though.
CherryNukaCola
CherryNukaCola10 May 2012, 04:12
I have to amend my previous comment with: No source? I believe this disqualifies you from the competition, which would be a pity, IMO.
steamgirl
steamgirlauthor11 May 2012, 13:12
Eep? It does? How do I get source code? Help! I thought that it was for people who use libraries? I'm so confused...
steamgirl
steamgirlauthor11 May 2012, 13:30
I put all of my scripts into a text file... is that good enough? I'm still not 100% sure what source code is? Do I need to ask the people behind GameMaker to give me some?
CherryNukaCola
CherryNukaCola12 May 2012, 09:15
I think that's fine? It's not specified on the rules page, but I don't think assets are included, it's usually just the scripting of the game - I think the spirit of the idea is so that we can all learn from each other. ^_^
thegreystudios
thegreystudios12 May 2012, 09:52
Okay this was a nice surprise. Liked the idea the mood and it has a well done end. Great! Simon
Aww this was so cool. Thank you steamgirl! I wish I had more visual cues for when something is happening, but I guess that would have meant more animation, and I know 48 hours isn't the time to make more animation :))

Top marks for theme, graphics and mood!
gritfish
gritfish14 May 2012, 00:16
Really cool. I still don't quite understand the weather tower mechanic, but the music and visuals all worked well with the growing/watering and wandering about. Very quiet and contemplative. Great work!
deathray
deathray27 Dec 2012, 03:46
Very beautiful game!

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