Final Days of the Victor

by khaotom
Overall★★★★★★★★★★2.75
Fun★★★★★★★★★★1.86
Innovation★★★★★★★★★★2.54
Theme★★★★★★★★★★2.69
Audio★★★★★★★★★★3.36
Humor★★★★★★★★★★1.67
Mood★★★★★★★★★★3.39
Coolness★★★★★★★★★★59%
A short game about villainy, fortresses, and the the end of the world.

Written in Twine. Sounds recorded on a Zoom H4n and edited in Audacity.

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Comments12

monomanio
monomanio17 Dec 2012, 04:43
Wow, this is actually quite good. Brings me back to my early years of gaming. Sounds really sealed the mood!
SimianLogic
SimianLogic17 Dec 2012, 04:52
Not sure if I was the bad guy or the prisoner--more of a story than a game, really. Does the story branch or is there one "right" path through it?
Meep17 Dec 2012, 10:08
The sounds made this much more enjoyable, great work!
Jonathan Whiting
Jonathan Whiting17 Dec 2012, 10:12
That was really nice. The writing was good, and the sound effects helped a lot with the mood. The css theme seemed a bit chirpy for the content!
Porpentine17 Dec 2012, 13:16
i like it, evocative.

yay fellow twine user
Rex Peppers
Rex Peppers17 Dec 2012, 15:59
The sound really helped make this work...
ilo17 Dec 2012, 23:18
Very nice! Missed a few details on the first playthrough but everything fell into place after I played it again.
zimra
zimra18 Dec 2012, 20:28
Nice writing !
GameRespect
GameRespect20 Dec 2012, 00:52
The remarkable writing coupled with the sound effects really made for an engaging experience, though there is no actual gameplay.
Zed20 Dec 2012, 15:57
I like this. It really made me think. Intrigued.
zenmumbler
zenmumbler31 Dec 2012, 09:52
Good writing. Not a game as much as a story, but a good story relevant to the theme. Nice.

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