Between the lines

by martijn
Overall★★★★★★★★★★3.73
Fun★★★★★★★★★★3.55
Innovation★★★★★★★★★★3.75
Theme★★★★★★★★★★4.16
Graphics★★★★★★★★★★3.94
Audio★★★★★★★★★★3.33
Humor★★★★★★★★★★2.72
Mood★★★★★★★★★★3.39
Coolness★★★★★★★★★★100%
This my entry for this competition.
The goal is to collect all colors (red/blue/yellow) in each level by touching them.

This game has 32 Levels and 42 "collectables". Can you find theme all?

The graphics were made by taking pictures of paper and changing their color in gimp. It also includes a custom lightning/shadow engine (Not that hard for a 2d game, but looks pretty nice).

Controls are displayed in-game, but in case you missed them:
left/right: move left and right
up or X: jump
spacebar or Z: fall through patflorm
R: restart level

Also you can press f4 to switch between windowed and fullscreen mode.

(Also there are potatoes, or so I heard)

A (audioless) playthrough can be found here:
http://www.twitch.tv/martijn_ludum/c/2215380
The real game does have sound

Comments73

SuperlevelSebastian28 Apr 2013, 13:35
Amazing. Had much fun! Thank you!
Jeremy Stark28 Apr 2013, 16:27
Amazing! This is really fun and a great idea! Good Job!
Overv
Overv28 Apr 2013, 18:31
Very clever concept, congrats!
Cybearg
Cybearg28 Apr 2013, 20:45
Ingenious concept with a sharp, interesting aesthetic to go with it!

If I'm honest, though, it didn't quite reach the potential it could have had as far as "fun" goes because of the controls and puzzle design. I was glad to see that new mechanics were introduced throughout, so the ideas were expanded upon and stayed interesting, but so many of the puzzles relied on precision jumping or tedious climbing by hopping from platform to platform, which was made frustrating because the controls are very loose and it's extremely easy to overshoot/undershoot your platform or to adjust yourself only to be sent flying off.

Still, great idea. Polish it up, tighten the controls, rework the puzzles, and I think it could make actual money. Pretty awesome for a <48-hour prototype!
Angelbait
Angelbait28 Apr 2013, 20:48
Very cool! Glad someone could figure out a nifty way to handle platforming and Minimalism. Good job!
martijn
martijnauthor28 Apr 2013, 21:23
@Cybearg
Thank you for your feedback. Seeing as there was still time left I updated the game (changed a total of 4 lines of code) and now you can move more precisely. Turns out I made a mistake where the player accelerated from 0 to top speed in a single frame instead of gradually.

NEW VERSION UPLOADED

changes:
smoother movement so you can do precision jumps more easily
(same download link)
Nacho28 Apr 2013, 21:37
Awesome job. Very unique concept, had lots of fun playing it (although the "skip level" prompt felt a little condescending :P)
martijn
martijnauthor28 Apr 2013, 21:42
The skip level button was not ment condescending. I'd rather some people skip some levels, than to stop playing because they were stuck. It was a last minute thing, so I haven't put a lot of thought into it.
theo
theo28 Apr 2013, 22:02
Fun, but the difficulty curve is kind of random, and a few levels seem extremely tedious. (The one where you have to go through like 100 walls? Why?) Oh, and the music sucks. 7/10, good work.
guestcheap29 Apr 2013, 07:59
Great art style, but I really hated those jumping challenges.
dylanaholcomb
dylanaholcomb29 Apr 2013, 08:00
I really enjoyed myself with this one. I had to rate a little down for the music simply because while the track was really catchy, it got a bit repetitive.
LrdKzrth29 Apr 2013, 08:04
Great game! Great fun! Really enjoyed it!
CMaster29 Apr 2013, 08:08
You need to make the existence of a quick-restart key more obvious, had a lot of frustration until I realized that existed.

Well executed though, even if I wasn't a huge fan of the "falling through things" mechanic.
Crynix
Crynix29 Apr 2013, 08:42
Wow, love the graphics.
Hadyn
Hadyn29 Apr 2013, 08:50
Oh man... Some of those levels are just mean, but the style is excellent! I agree with some existing comments regarding music and the slightly tedious climbing that appears on a few stages. A couple of steps would be cool, but sometimes it's just too much - especially if you die and have to start again. Also, I got stuck on the 'line with no colour' level for a crazy amount of time. I thought maybe there were invisible lines or something, until I eventually found the mechanic which lets you beat it (I imagine some earlier stages might have been easier too if I'd discovered the mechanic sooner!).

Still, this is one of the few games that had me wanting to persevere to the very end, and the sense of achievement when beating the game was great, even if I only had 4 potatoes =[
ashdnazg29 Apr 2013, 10:30
Very nice game!
Level design was wonderful except the jumping/climbing bits.
They're less of a puzzle and more of a chore.
Morgawr
Morgawr29 Apr 2013, 11:52
Really great game, loved the humor and the simple and yet effective mechanics.
I agree the levels got tiring quickly but overall a very solid concept.

It's sad you put "Linux is better" in the windows level and yet aren't shipping the game for Linux too (I ran it fine with wine).

+1 point to humor for that line by the way :)
Xeke_Death29 Apr 2013, 12:06
Nice work indeed. I really liked the graphic style with the photos of paper. And the little animations and particles on the character when it jumped. Fun game.
Diamonde
Diamonde29 Apr 2013, 12:12
It was really tricky on some levels, but the game is a real blast! I really like the graphical style and the actual game play. Super well done :)
lucasncv
lucasncv29 Apr 2013, 12:57
Best entry I've played so far, very very nice. Well done!
dvdking29 Apr 2013, 13:41
fun game, with good mechanics
controls should be more polished
great that it has "skip level" feature, some levels looked so impossible to finish :)
tonic29 Apr 2013, 13:43
A game like Piet Mondrian's paintings! :) Pretty interesting idea. Some levels a little bit frustrating, and the feedback about hitting each color could be more instant. A nice game overall!
Hegemege
Hegemege29 Apr 2013, 14:26
Interesting concept, but the game controls felt a bit sloppy. Some of the puzzles were kinda frustrating, but there were some nice puzzles there as well. Overall, pretty good job!
3.1429 Apr 2013, 14:43
It works as a game and is complete. I wouldn't add or take away a thing.
cmayhem29 Apr 2013, 14:43
Very fun and the graphics are just great, music is cool.
The platforming controls need a bit of tweaking, they make the game much more difficult.
Spelchan29 Apr 2013, 15:43
Very fun with enough of a puzzle element to keep it interesting. Kind of a large download though.
kewry29 Apr 2013, 16:11
Amazing game, and that potato is beautiful
michail
michail29 Apr 2013, 18:40
The best entry I've played so far - simple, but excellent idea, great level design and lovely audio!
TheSambassador29 Apr 2013, 19:34
I love that so many of these games are going with the image for "minimalism" on wikipedia as their graphic inspiration.

This is pretty fun! Basic controls and implementation, and pretty satisfying gameplay.

The game started really bugging out on the levels with the green-bouncy stuff. It seems like when you hit that stuff with your head, the game doesn't handle it very well.

Also, the "warps" were pretty annoying when they kept just going back immediately. It would have been better to have to leave the "warp landing" and then go back in to get teleported back.

Jumping was a bit tedious at times with the "switchbacks". I would have preferred the game without those levels.

Overall good job!
gameXcore29 Apr 2013, 20:34
Fun, but I really struggled with the controls.
egos29 Apr 2013, 21:16
special mention to the shadow really good use.
The game polishing is really nice too
Michael Hall29 Apr 2013, 21:19
Great game, really fits the theme, also thanks for the skip level option. Sound is a bit intrusive though.
atraxgames29 Apr 2013, 22:21
Very Cool! Graphics and Music are awesome, many levels, gameplay is challenging. And also potato.
Crazi45629 Apr 2013, 23:13
Was very fun, the music was great!
EdoMiyamoto
EdoMiyamoto30 Apr 2013, 12:36
This game is a nice surprise !
nintendoeats30 Apr 2013, 16:07
I don't know if this is intentional (might be a keyboard cluster issues), but I can't hold the jump button and go transparent at the same time. It's...starting to drive me nuts. Even when I'm deliberately trying to switch keys, I just can't do it with enough precision on a keyboard. Maybe on a controller, but not on this thing. LD has taught me that I need a new keyboard.

I do quite like this concept though. It also looks nice, and this is certainly the most modern music that I've heard so far this LD. Is that a plus? I don't know, but it's a piece of information!
lightnarcissus
lightnarcissus30 Apr 2013, 16:56
This is executed to near-perfection. Solid job in making such a polished game in 2 days!
dasrkrain30 Apr 2013, 18:08
Great job. Really hard.
Purplescape
Purplescape30 Apr 2013, 18:23
Great concept. Some of the levels were a bit difficult, I'm glad the skip level button was there. Controls were a little hard, but it was a lot of fun.
Zed30 Apr 2013, 18:30
Very cool. A unique mechanic, good use of the theme, fair bit of gameplay, nice music.
bytegrove30 Apr 2013, 18:43
Cool interpretation of the theme, but you used music from incompetech.com (as mentioned in the credits). Isn't that against the rules? :/
saampahlavan
saampahlavan30 Apr 2013, 18:58
I also went with a Mondrian Art style. this was fun I really like your take on this and the level design was interesting
Stiju30 Apr 2013, 19:47
Great game.
Puzzlem00n
Puzzlem00n30 Apr 2013, 20:18
I made a game based off the whole Mondrian/De Stijl thing, too, and I like the look of yours!

I admit, I used the skip level button 3 or 4 times and only got nine potatoes, but I think I can say I beat it.

All the green blocks were really annoying, and the fact you had to hold up while phasing through walls at certain puzzles wasn't immediately clear, but other than that, great work. You have real skill for level design, and a lot of it.
Kimeric Labs30 Apr 2013, 20:19
Pretty fun! Also, really liked the graphics made from paper, but I guess you could go for less digital treatment and use more "real world stuff" on the levels, since you went that way. Anyway, cool game! :)
Shugor
Shugor30 Apr 2013, 21:01
This was a really fun game to play~ The difficult curve was good, and I liked how you actually used all of the mechanics fairly often, it was fun figuring out how you could use everything. The trampoline color seems to work slightly buggy at times, and the skip level button had a tendency to fly around the screen really fast while I was respawning, but there's not really anything about the game itself I can complain about, apart from the lack of an option to play individual levels :y
qdowngames30 Apr 2013, 21:48
If you think about it, it's a very simple checkpoint game. Yet it seemed so new and fun. Nice work!
Ithildin
Ithildin30 Apr 2013, 22:25
As some people have already said, this game is quite promising. I love how the paper-like graphics look. Great job!
Nezzhil30 Apr 2013, 22:35
Very good idea. Long and have a pretty good curve of difficulty.
multitude
multitude1 May 2013, 00:12
awesome game. really enjoyed it. something different to all the other games and i loved that this was done with photos.
jpcote1 May 2013, 01:18
Cool game, the skip level was a good idea.
ddionisio
ddionisio1 May 2013, 02:55
Really cool game! The paper art style with the lighting and shadow fit so well and added that nice extra feel to it. Then there's the music, that really set the mood nicely.
aneeslol1 May 2013, 03:23
Super slick graphics with some really creative levels. Easily one of my favorite games here.
Husky
Husky1 May 2013, 07:50
Pretty awesome!
Some levels are a little tricky, but it's still fun!
And I like the music, good job!:D
WauloK
WauloK1 May 2013, 11:52
Lots of fun! Well done! :)
caranha
caranha1 May 2013, 13:54
I loved the graphical style, really consistent. It also has a nice challenge curve.

I think it would be nice if there was a list of levels somewhere, so that we could see how far we had gotten - right now you can either skip a level, or press escape to completely quit the game.

Thanks for the cool game!

PS: in a few levels, the skip button started jumping everywhere like crazy as I moved. I think it is nice that the button moves out of the way, but you might want to look into that! :-)

Cheers,
IceCliff
IceCliff1 May 2013, 15:44
I'm excited to play this! Just waiting for the download to finish! :D
IceCliff
IceCliff1 May 2013, 16:05
This game's concept is so simple but your level design takes it a long way.
Oleg Zhurko1 May 2013, 18:29
Really fun gameplay. Also hidden potatoes!
pvwradtke
pvwradtke1 May 2013, 23:27
Great, loved the puzzle based platforming of your game. Very innovative and challenging. Congratulations, one of the best games I have played until now. Keep the good work!
whilefun2 May 2013, 03:12
Wow, good job! :) It got very difficult at times, so I'm glad there was a skip level button
Travis Irby2 May 2013, 08:27
Cool game! Really like the aesthetic, the texturing and lighting. I thought the controls felt really good, nice job :)
Rafael Sales2 May 2013, 19:22
Fucking awesome concept. Congratz!
kulhajs
kulhajs2 May 2013, 20:52
Absolutely amazing game! Well done!
kill0u
kill0u5 May 2013, 21:54
Loved this one! The last levels were too difficult for me though :P
LUD4K
LUD4K11 May 2013, 13:05
Awesome game and concept I really enjoyed playing it. Well done
KEFIR
KEFIR14 May 2013, 23:24
Oh yeah! I saved it in my favorites list! Very very nice entry. Everything is good about it!

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