Free*

Overall★★★★★★★★★★3.40
Fun★★★★★★★★★★2.31
Innovation★★★★★★★★★★2.93
Theme★★★★★★★★★★3.51
Graphics★★★★★★★★★★4.15
Audio★★★★★★★★★★2.06
Humor★★★★★★★★★★2.81
Mood★★★★★★★★★★3.75
Coolness★★★★★★★★★★88%
PLEASE READ THIS BEFORE PLAYING/RATING:

THIS GAME MAY OR MAY NOT WORK ON YOUR GRANDMA'S/SCHOOL RIG! Apparently, the game does not play nicely on older hardware. If you encounter large blank areas or red boxes, please realize that that isn't the game, and don't rate it! I'm working on a fix!

From the Wikipedia page on Minimalism:

"Minimalism describes movements in various forms of art and design, especially visual art and music, where the work is set out to expose the essence or identity of a subject through eliminating all non-essential forms, features or concepts."

I made Free* with the idea in mind that life as we know it boils down to very few key aspects, and I tried my best to make every little thing important, from the way you move through the game, to the game's audio, to the coloring of the environment. I thank you for visiting my game's page and hope you play/rate/enjoy it!

Press D to move to the right.

Sorry about the lack of ports. Check back later and I'll have them ready!

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All in all, I'm content with the way this turned out. if I were to do it again, I'd spend more time emphasizing certain parts, but it's all in the past now. Thanks for playing!

Comments36

Follett29 Apr 2013, 04:55
Depressing but also lovely. The art style is great. I think you really missed out not adding some eary audio in the background but great anyway!
deathray
deathray29 Apr 2013, 04:57
That was beautiful. This sack of meat is kind of sad now though.
lulzfish_429 Apr 2013, 04:58
Reminds me of "Consoul". I was confused by the huge blank space, and the parts that were red boxes. Other than that, it was okay. I think you could have made it more heart-wrenching though, maybe if you showed the child somehow.
bobo72a29 Apr 2013, 04:58
I really enjoyed this game. It is a good game.
paulopn
paulopn29 Apr 2013, 05:00
That was amazing! Definitely a proof that games can send powerful messages even better than movies. Not being able to go back was a nice touch. I have only one complaint:the signs are readable on a very small area, I accidentally skipped over one or two of them...
Again, awesome job!
ENDESGA
ENDESGA29 Apr 2013, 05:03
Nice. but a tad tedious.

the art is fantastic, but this is more of a story...
great work though!

-ENDESGA
artifex29 Apr 2013, 05:07
My kind of game/humor. Great.
GreaseMonkey29 Apr 2013, 05:08
Tested with wine 1.5.18-git, appears to run fine.

Anyhow, for starters this isn't a game, it's a story with a "hold to advance" key.

There was quite a bit of effort on the graphics and it all LOOKS nice (considering the black-and-white-ness), but it could definitely do with some more animation in places AND THE PLAYER DOESN'T GO UP STEPS WHAT THE HELL

Didn't hear any audio, so N/A for that.

First entry I've managed to give a score for humour for. It's got a fairly nice and mildly amusing tone to it.

Moodwise... it tends to lose momentum at the end. So much more could be done here.

Overall... 2 stars. Make a game next time.
Kortuga98author29 Apr 2013, 05:37
@GreaseMonkey thanks for the feedback! We obviously have different definitions of the term 'game,' but I appreciate the rate.
Linus Lindberg29 Apr 2013, 09:53
Looks really interesting but I'm not on my windows computer :c
Kortuga98author29 Apr 2013, 20:38
@lulzfish_4 Do you happen to have a 32-bit machine? The game wasn't tested on anything but a 64-bit Windows OS, so I can't confirm or deny that it really works on anything other than that.
Mekuri29 Apr 2013, 21:20
This game is beautiful. This is exactly the kind of game I was hoping would come out of this dare. I can see why you chose not to add any sounds- But personally I could see some more emotion in this game with the right music and sounds.
KEFIR
KEFIR29 Apr 2013, 21:21
So depressing :) A little annoying that you can't get back to read missed plates :( And it would be great to listen some depressing music in background :)
zanzindorf29 Apr 2013, 21:22
Fantastic graphics. The only thing I would change would be adding some simple ambient noises or some music. I'm not sure how I feel about having Humor as part of the grading criteria. I think 'games' can be inclusive of other emotions, and your game is proof of that.
siondream
siondream29 Apr 2013, 21:29
Not much of a game but I liked the art and the message, very depressing too. Some changing and blending background music would have been great.
8BitPimp
8BitPimp29 Apr 2013, 22:05
That is really great. Such a bleak message but really great.
SuperlevelSebastian29 Apr 2013, 23:26
Too sad, I can't play it. Following message comes up, when I try to start it (Win XP):

"Unexpected error occured when running the game." :(
Kortuga98author30 Apr 2013, 00:23
@SuperlevelSebastian I believe the game only runs on 64-bit OSs. Apologies :(
vinull
vinull30 Apr 2013, 01:01
Interesting, and made me smile a few times.
GreaseMonkey30 Apr 2013, 01:03
@Kortuga98, @SuperlevelSebastian: It's a 32-bit .exe, so I'm not sure why it wouldn't work on a 32-bit OS.
GreaseMonkey30 Apr 2013, 01:06
OK, did a quick objdump + grep, it appears to use AVX instructions in quite a few places. I'm not sure if they're part of a special codepath or if they're unavoidable; in the latter case, you will need at least a Sandy Bridge-era CPU.
protensity30 Apr 2013, 01:06
Excellent little game. I think you have a real knack for visual storytelling.

The game kind of beats you over the head with is themes from the beginning though - a little subtlety would make the story even better.
jackspinoza
jackspinoza30 Apr 2013, 01:16
this really worked for me, of course I could see where it was going but as it came to pass it still effected me. really liked this.
N42730 Apr 2013, 01:32
Wow, really good! And incredibly similar to my last Ludum Dare game. Hmmm...
qdowngames30 Apr 2013, 02:19
Quite deep. Glad I played it
Tyro
Tyro1 May 2013, 02:31
Really gorgeous art, good work!
Tozy
Tozy1 May 2013, 04:33
Jason Rohrer did it before :P
Well, the "you win" at the end really makes you stop and think for a second.
naufr4g05 May 2013, 20:29
Quite depressing, but it would have given more if it also had a sad background music. ;)
Really good graphics and transition from an age to another is really well done.
Keep up the good work! :)
MinionStudios
MinionStudios5 May 2013, 20:34
Fantastic art! Original style, I love it.
angelk5 May 2013, 20:46
I'm glad you described why you went with this for the theme. I love the story telling. The art is simple and endearing. Some simple audio might go a long way. Great job with the feels!
imagnity
imagnity7 May 2013, 18:51
Never thought "Sin City" effect can be that catchy! It's mesmerizing!
HeyZeus13 May 2013, 23:10
Awesome graphics, good job.

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