I found the game very hard to complete. It was actually quite funny! But the Game was quite annoying(is this game even completable?). Anyway It was a pretty funny game!
@Owydam : Thanks :) I think after the ludum I'll make a v.2 of this interractive fiction to change some feature / passage / problems, I take note of this ! Thanks. :)
@jammy12789 : Yes, the difficulty is one of the main problem. I'll correct that in a future version I think. But you're lucky, at the beginning, there was only one way to win ! If you had fun, I'm happy :)
@Brassawiking : Thanks ! You reassure myself because it was my biggest fear.
Very fun game :D Don't worry about the writing, it's perfectly clear what you want to say :) I managed to survive in two different ways, not sure how many there are :P
I like how you didn't write novels on each of the pages (unlike some other similar games...), and how I can just rip both the wires out of the stupid bomb.Good game.
I like how you didn't write novels on each of the pages (unlike some other similar games...), and how I can just rip both the wires out of the stupid bomb. Good game.
Pretty good. I liked a lot of the humour (such as the silly things you could do while preparing to die, or the response to running away without warning people). The way the story defused (pun intended) some of the more typical action-hero responses felt pretty realistic, too.
The best ending was a bit too silly for me, but humour is always a matter of taste.
On the downside, it's not much of a game: getting a good ending seems a bit more dependent on trial-and-error than logic. Also, the writing itself isn't very impressive. This isn't about technical issues (I know you're not a native English speaker; neither am I, for that matter), but a bit more descriptiveness and mood could go a long way. On the other hand, the comedic bits work well.
In short: nothing outstanding, but very funny in places.
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Anyway It was a pretty funny game!
@jammy12789 : Yes, the difficulty is one of the main problem. I'll correct that in a future version I think. But you're lucky, at the beginning, there was only one way to win ! If you had fun, I'm happy :)
@Brassawiking : Thanks ! You reassure myself because it was my biggest fear.
Don't worry about the writing, it's perfectly clear what you want to say :)
I managed to survive in two different ways, not sure how many there are :P
Thanks for feedbacks ! :)
Nice little text adventure.
@Colapsydo Pee will be the reason of the end of the world, I'm sure of that !
I restart link didn't worked for me.
The best ending was a bit too silly for me, but humour is always a matter of taste.
On the downside, it's not much of a game: getting a good ending seems a bit more dependent on trial-and-error than logic. Also, the writing itself isn't very impressive. This isn't about technical issues (I know you're not a native English speaker; neither am I, for that matter), but a bit more descriptiveness and mood could go a long way. On the other hand, the comedic bits work well.
In short: nothing outstanding, but very funny in places.