Dance Instructor

Kind of short, even for a puzzle-based Twine. Still, nice to see you giving it a shot!

Also keen to see the other options of that timer script get some use.

Really great idea + implementation, would love to see it expanded on

Rather short, and I found it difficult to read whilst the timer was going down. But, the writing was well done. Also, a little short

Short and to the point.

I agree a bit short, but it ties to the theme very well..

Short and to the point (as the other commentors have noted.) Something to be said for minimalism.

a little short but nice game, like the idea awesome good work

Wow, very alternative, but really breath-taking, actually! For a text-based game, it was quite fun to play.

Interesting start... would like to see it expanded.

Using a timer in a text game, that's something, very nice way to pratice my dynamic reading xD
Still don't know If I managed to beat it, there's no more options and the rewind doesn't work, so I think maybe this is it.
Also, creative title.

Very nice use of a timer on a text-based game! It was very thrilling and well-written. Would love to see an extended version of this! Great job! :D

Great use of the theme for a twine game. It doesn't need to be any longer, but I think it could be. Perhaps a sequel? :P

A bit short but I liked it!

Never thought i would like a text game this much,
Want more of it ;)

Fantastic idea, one of the few gamelike twines I've ever seen. It could have been longer (mayybe not because of the timer), but I enjoyed what there was of it.

Very interesting...It'd be nice to see it be a bit longer, but it's a very cool idea.

I expected a music to fit with the name ... But it's a nice work :)

Of all the bomb defusing games I've played in this LD, this is one of the better. I like the bells and whistles you've added to the usual Twine set-up, and the timer is great. Nice work on puzzles, too.

Typo: "goto" should be two words.

SPOILER

The ending felt a bit abrupt, but it still works.