Inside Yourself

Overall★★★★★★★★★★2.86

Fun★★★★★★★★★★2.19

Innovation★★★★★★★★★★2.60

Theme★★★★★★★★★★3.57

Mood★★★★★★★★★★3.80

Coolness★★★★★★★★★★35%

Twine game that didn't go exactly as planned, but I'm still proud. Set goal, achieved goal. I'll take it. And a HUGE thank you to the person (you know who you are of course, you're in the link) who put my game on his server until I can solve my dropbox/twine conflict. THANK YOU!

Comments14

microapple28 Apr 2014, 03:19

Can't seam to open the game, I think you may have linked to the dropbox page rather than the .html file itself...

Galvus28 Apr 2014, 03:21

Unable to run game dropbox wants to download the html.

nerdybirdy346author28 Apr 2014, 03:42

Sorry guys, for the life of me I cant figure out what's going on here. I'd love to blame in on a headache, but I'm trying my best, promise :)

finefin28 Apr 2014, 07:54

here, I put it up my server until you fixed the dropbox woe:
http://finefin.com/ludumdare/beneaththesurface/Beneath.html

You can link to this anytime, if you want. It'l be up there until you tell me to delete it. okay?

now I'm going to test it ;)

finefin28 Apr 2014, 08:07

wow, that was creepy! very nice interactive story!

PaperBlurt28 Apr 2014, 08:24

Better to play online, but I donwloaded it played it.

Good mood, eerie ending.

nerdybirdy346author28 Apr 2014, 15:19

finefin you are AMAZING lol thank you! I've figured out it's some glitch with twine that's doing it, it's been a bit funny since I had my comp redone but it's really being a hassle!

Snoother28 Apr 2014, 17:45

Wonderfully disturbing, especially the ending.

iamwhosiam28 Apr 2014, 20:48

whoa a journey of the mind!!

Thorig29 Apr 2014, 07:40

It is a weird interesting story. Well done.

Newt_30 Apr 2014, 21:54

Very creepy but good! It wasn't so much a game, as much as a story that you have to click to advance to the next section, but it was really great. Awesome job!

Jeffalisk2 May 2014, 06:35

Creepy atmosphere and a nice sense of foreboding building throughout. Good work.

oranebeast2 May 2014, 06:39

A great journey

Penguincat5 May 2014, 23:53

I liked the story, though after the ending I still felt like some things were unresolved, and there were some grammatical issues along the way (mostly in the use of past tense). You did a great job with the unsettling mood. This is one of the more interesting takes on the theme I've seen so far.