Lonely Boy

Overall★★★★★★★★★★3.81
Fun★★★★★★★★★★2.65
Innovation★★★★★★★★★★4.23
Theme★★★★★★★★★★2.76
Graphics★★★★★★★★★★4.00
Audio★★★★★★★★★★4.13
Mood★★★★★★★★★★4.27
Coolness★★★★★★★★★★42%
Lonely Boy is my entry for the 29th Ludum Dare competition, based on the theme Beneath the Surface. The game is a 3D, black and white, third (invisible) person non-shooter, story-based game, with limericks as the only form of narrative. It started out as an experiment in 3D rendering.

Instructions:
Enter: Go Fullscreen (Recommended)
W, A, S, D: Move
Mouse: Look

For Chrome users: If clicking on the title at the start does not make it go away, try opening the game in Firefox.

Comments23

Geckoo1337
Geckoo133727 Apr 2014, 21:12
This concept is really amazing and it seems to me you are a poet. Thank you for this travel ++
smbe19
smbe1927 Apr 2014, 23:45
Amazing game and really nice music!
tacs
tacs28 Apr 2014, 08:41
Really lovely.
ApoorvaJ
ApoorvaJauthor28 Apr 2014, 13:48
Thanks for playing. I've played and rated all your games.
Lucio28 Apr 2014, 13:52
Excelent Music. Cool concept. Well done!
zedutchgandalf
zedutchgandalf28 Apr 2014, 13:56
Amazing! I love the artstyle, the limericks and the music!
FileCorrupted28 Apr 2014, 13:57
This game was so orginal! Such a neat concept!
geekdrums
geekdrums28 Apr 2014, 14:00
Reminds me of unfinished swan or rain. great experience.
Khaldrin
Khaldrin28 Apr 2014, 14:03
Great entry. I really like the art style and the way you make the player discover the world. The choice of narrative fits the game very well and the music is beautiful.
philip_sinclair28 Apr 2014, 14:04
Wow. an intersting experience. and very atmospheric. i think if the text was audio it would work better as i was more keen to watch the beautiful imagery than read the text. beautiful work.
ApoorvaJ
ApoorvaJauthor28 Apr 2014, 14:05
@Lucio: Thanks for playing. Your game was really good too. The most fun I've had this LD.
cageinabird28 Apr 2014, 14:26
A different kind of experience to fun, but very satisfying nonetheless.
ills28 Apr 2014, 14:38
Wow!
Diptoman
Diptoman28 Apr 2014, 14:50
Brilliant stuff! If only it lasted longer..
Atmospherium
Atmospherium28 Apr 2014, 18:00
Great work! I really like the visuals and how they kinda built the stark and empty tone of the game.
thinkster28 Apr 2014, 21:15
Only thing is I thought it was a bit slow to start, wish there was a bit more incentive straight from the beginning. Apart from that loved the art and music, really enjoyed the concept!
rylgh29 Apr 2014, 09:31
gorgeous unique style, lovely music
zatyka
zatyka30 Apr 2014, 00:50
I'm exactly not sure why, but I loved it. Great music and visuals.
Cake&Code30 Apr 2014, 09:59
The visuals are super cool, and I really like the concept of the game! Sort of reminded me of a vextrex game :D
Crefossus
Crefossus19 May 2014, 23:08
Really like the audio but it's missing some sound effects. Extremely innovative but also slightly lacking in fun. I think the blindness also works against you as much as it works for the mood and theme of the game.

The art was very well done, especially the player footsteps and drawing the walls.

The writing was excellent and provided a good direction for the player.

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