This game was made by using Twine and illustrated with photoshop CS6. It's a choose your own adventure based on how we tend to wear masks, but beneath the surface we all have problems.
oh my gosh, this is absolutely gorgeous. really lovely artwork, and i love how you integrated it with Twine; that must have been so much work! thanks so much for making this.
Love the pictures. They're all really well-drawn and have a distinct common-style. And it has a cute, appealing story.
My one overriding issue was how small the font was. Increasing it by, say, 50% would make the presentation noticeably nicer. But this is a minor gripe.
What a cute kid's story! I unfortunately can't comment very much on the writing or art, because I don't know much about the standards for that demographic--but they seemed pretty good to me, and I liked the bear-stag (?) that appeared at the end of the story.
My main gripe is that the user interface is kind of difficult to use--you have text-only option points, and images of varying sizes. Snapping between these things means that I have to keep on looking away from the region I focus as the center of the story--the pictures. And, it seems like to keep kids' attention, you'd want to have the images remain central, so there's not A Picture Part And A Word Part.
I hear that this is hard to do in Twine (I'm not really familiar with it), so you might be interested in this other compo entry, that apparently figured out a workaround:
Fun to see graphics in Twine and you do have some skills when it comes to drawing.
Would be fun to see a bit more work with the rest such as fonts, just to get a good whole so to say.
Good!