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Overall★★★★★★★★★★2.67
Fun★★★★★★★★★★2.35
Innovation★★★★★★★★★★3.37
Theme★★★★★★★★★★2.06
Graphics★★★★★★★★★★2.06
Audio★★★★★★★★★★2.11
Humor★★★★★★★★★★2.47
Mood★★★★★★★★★★2.71
Coolness★★★★★★★★★★98%
A short visual novel with an unusual control scheme.

It has two plotlines - one overt and one Beneath the Surface...

I hope you enjoy!

Notes:

- Controls:

1.Click on letters to select them, select a whole word to continue.

2.MOUSE LEFT also skips text spooling

3.Press H for a hint.

- For raters: Endings 1-4 are pretty similar so don't worry if you don't see them all. If you saw one of them and one of 6-7 you saw most of the content.

Comments18

Caridorc28 Apr 2014, 11:10
I like this game, the story is intense (I love pizza).
Zolkren28 Apr 2014, 13:26
Cool and nice game.
Tanner28 Apr 2014, 14:09
Story was nice. Keep it up! Next LD will be better :)
fullmontis
fullmontis28 Apr 2014, 20:39
Now I want some pizza. The gameplay itself is original but not very fun to be honest, I found clicking on each letter a little tedious... Story was funny.
AugustSnow
AugustSnowauthor28 Apr 2014, 21:35
@fullmontis yep, I thought of some ways to make selecting words easier without lowering the difficulty (mainly - dragging a line across the whole word) but didn't have time to implement.
DarkMeatGames29 Apr 2014, 17:47
Nice story, but gameplay was lacking. Might have been better as a simple choose your own adventure type game, as it is, I'm just clicking on highlighted letters.
Xaychru04
Xaychru0429 Apr 2014, 20:11
Pretty original entry, I liked being able to make choices, there was not a lot of gameplay elements, but it was cool to see where my choices leaded. Nice game! :)
Nicoll Hunt29 Apr 2014, 21:35
I liked it. And now I want pizza.
pancakecity
pancakecity30 Apr 2014, 18:03
Great game, enjoyed playing a different mechanic than usual.
nimblegorilla1 May 2014, 01:30
Hmmm, tried to pay and didn't get any pizza!
gettothechapel1 May 2014, 12:43
i like that you took a different approach to the theme.
gre
gre1 May 2014, 18:31
Nice story. The game is original.
I'm not sure to get the take on the theme.
Skipi1 May 2014, 19:46
I liked the story. Now I'm hungry for pizza DX
f7f52 May 2014, 11:41
I like the original approach to gameplay and making choices, it's just a bit tedious to click letter by letter. Maybe easier word selection mode could be tried. I'm glad for the hints: I needed it to find endings 6-7.

Nice work!
xgeovanni3 May 2014, 11:40
I got endings 2, 3, 5, 6 and 7. I did end up having to resort to hints.
Belvar5 May 2014, 20:28
I didn't found all the endings, after a moment my eyes were seeing letters everywhere and I felt confused ^^
Cool concept anyway, it should be more interesting with a story a bit more epic :p
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