Under a bush of roses
You suddenly hear a loud scream in the street:
"The Black Shadows! They're everywhere!".
You instantly reach your backyard to raise an hidden door under a bush of roses. A secret passage appears. It leads to your secret bunker. You reach it and close carefully the door behind. Nobody can discover you, now.
The room is well furnished and organized. You can live here for years.
But you think (you don't know why) that 7 days will suffice.
USE CTRL+MOUSEWHEEL TO SET THE FONT SIZE
A game made with Twine.
"The Black Shadows! They're everywhere!".
You instantly reach your backyard to raise an hidden door under a bush of roses. A secret passage appears. It leads to your secret bunker. You reach it and close carefully the door behind. Nobody can discover you, now.
The room is well furnished and organized. You can live here for years.
But you think (you don't know why) that 7 days will suffice.
USE CTRL+MOUSEWHEEL TO SET THE FONT SIZE
A game made with Twine.
Comments26
dsoft2029 Apr 2014, 08:41
Nice graphics & great storytelling :d
superfrog29 Apr 2014, 08:45
Nice game. Congrats.
Zeta29 Apr 2014, 12:06
I like the graphics and the play style, great work
Marcus_siactro29 Apr 2014, 12:08
Awesome! I really enjoyed this one...yet again I am a sucker for text based games.
Jeasonfire29 Apr 2014, 12:11
Got bad end 2. Very good story telling, occassionally funny options and great graphics. A very solid entry.
Jeffalisk29 Apr 2014, 12:15
Really enjoyed that! The writing was great, the message when you read Miley Cyrus book in particular. And I was shocked IRL the one time I saw a shadow through the telescope!
quill1829 Apr 2014, 12:30
I think this is a good format for a storytelling game. Reminds me of a choose-your-own-adventure book.
AmmoreChicks29 Apr 2014, 13:42
Thanks everyone.
Orangejuice72429 Apr 2014, 14:09
Overall good game, feel as though the times I played it it made you want to play more and find all the other endings.
I believe this was insync with the theme and was a good interpretation
I believe this was insync with the theme and was a good interpretation
Snoother29 Apr 2014, 16:21
Great use of theme. Had the kind of "Horse Master" feel, which is invariably a good thing. And I too enjoyed the irony and cultural satire.
Some easily rectified stuff:
Noticed a bug: on the "Search for a radio station" node, the picture wasn't appearing.
A misspelling: "somobody (or something) is hidden behind a tree"
Some easily rectified stuff:
Noticed a bug: on the "Search for a radio station" node, the picture wasn't appearing.
A misspelling: "somobody (or something) is hidden behind a tree"
AmmoreChicks29 Apr 2014, 18:17
@Orangejuice724: Thanks!
@Snoother: Thank you very much!!! I've just fixed. I didn't know "Horse Master", at the moment I've only searched google and bookmarked it.
@Snoother: Thank you very much!!! I've just fixed. I didn't know "Horse Master", at the moment I've only searched google and bookmarked it.
Catman29 Apr 2014, 19:01
Nice graphics and interesting story! Good job!
dmcfarline29 Apr 2014, 19:51
Nice atmosphere and pixel art, good job!
IAmSpencer29 Apr 2014, 21:03
Liked the pixel art, good story made me feel like I was the player, and not just playing the game, good job :)
SunShiranui30 Apr 2014, 10:17
Nice! I wonder why my character was compelled to go out... is it because of too much shock?
SunShiranui30 Apr 2014, 10:23
Now I got END 2!
AmmoreChicks30 Apr 2014, 11:07
Thanks again for the comments!
@shunshiranui: if the shock level (the only variable you can see) becomes too high, you must go out. END 2? You're lucky!!
@shunshiranui: if the shock level (the only variable you can see) becomes too high, you must go out. END 2? You're lucky!!
rujo1 May 2014, 01:17
i'm more into action games but i loved the visuals and the extreme big pixel art! i adore these kind of things :)
Jupiter_Hadley1 May 2014, 03:04
Pretty nice story! I included it in part 5 of my Ludum Dare compilation video series, if you'd like to check it out :) youtu.be/HquvNllyc50
AmmoreChicks1 May 2014, 09:59
Thanks Rujo! You're great, Jupiter!
lukepilgrim1 May 2014, 16:20
sweet graphics and a nice story. i liked that the texts were not longer than needed.
AmmoreChicks1 May 2014, 18:29
@lukepilgrim ;)
RobotParking1 May 2014, 20:07
This is super cool!
AmmoreChicks2 May 2014, 09:54
Thank you, RobotParking.
kikaz18 May 2014, 21:08
Nice graphics, nice ambient, dark shadows make me fear ! ^^
Maybe a bit hard to understand what to do.
Felt a bit like a only clicked around.
But the irony and satire was oozing.
Good going...