Thirteen

Overall★★★★★★★★★★3.00
Fun★★★★★★★★★★2.62
Innovation★★★★★★★★★★2.28
Theme★★★★★★★★★★2.63
Graphics★★★★★★★★★★3.48
Audio★★★★★★★★★★2.63
Humor★★★★★★★★★★2.17
Mood★★★★★★★★★★3.47
Coolness★★★★★★★★★★100%
As a private detective, you're following the trails of one mysterious man.

Everything was pointing to an abandoned hotel and now you must find your way out of there, but not everything is what it seems...

Solo entry.
Thanks to freesfx. co. uk for some of the sounds.

Genres: adventure

Comments33

lucienpro25 Aug 2014, 07:51
Ummm. Looks cool but there is no link...
enderargent
enderargentauthor25 Aug 2014, 09:11
I'm still working on the game, sorry for the mistake uploading this too soon.
@TeddyNashor25 Aug 2014, 09:14
dont rate any entries before you put up a link because it puts you at the top of the queue since you rated, but ahve no ratings. haha oh well, know for next time XD.
enderargent
enderargentauthor25 Aug 2014, 09:21
Thanks didn't know that, haha it's my first Ludum and I don't know that :P

Again, thanks.
ViliX25 Aug 2014, 09:29
Let me know when the link becomes available. Twitter: @ViliX64 Thanks. The screenshot looks cool.
HeuGamer
HeuGamer25 Aug 2014, 17:12
Screenshot looks pretty interesting. Will have to check this one out when you are done!
Joncom25 Aug 2014, 17:46
The graphics do look nice :)
IsaacL.Balogh
IsaacL.Balogh26 Aug 2014, 00:51
Plays a lot like home but you might want to make it a bit more linear.
Raphy
Raphy26 Aug 2014, 01:31
Cool game, sometimes it's hard to find what exact item you need to find but overall I like the mood.
toranoko
toranoko26 Aug 2014, 01:36
Great game, only gripe was player walk speed, maybe add some running, also I didn't like that I couldn't continue walking when trying to pick stuff up, mostly because the walking was slow as is.
ClownAround26 Aug 2014, 01:55
Controls were a bit awkward. Cool game though. Nice idea.
enderargent
enderargentauthor26 Aug 2014, 08:48
@toranoko thanks for the review, I will try to update the walk speed today since I'm out of home.

Thank you all for your reviews :)
panurge26 Aug 2014, 09:10
Very nice little game with an intriguing story and strong atmosphere. My only suggestions would be to increase the walk speed a little and allow players to pick things up straight after they've looked at them (the icons would disappear for me after I'd investigated something and I'd have to walk away then back again to interact with it).

Good work!
enderargent
enderargentauthor26 Aug 2014, 10:05
@panurge Thanks for your feedback mate about the game I will upload soon an update with the walk speed fixed a bit, I'm sorry for the item/inventory but who knows, maybe I can add it ^^
bob_fish26 Aug 2014, 10:29
Very fun! I actually replayed it to see both endings! Love the art. If it Just had music, it would basically be perfect!
Nuclear Napalm26 Aug 2014, 10:38
The beginning of the game is really promising and intriguing. I like it because it similar to my concept. But both endings a bit disappointing. Anyway, great job!
Pavel26 Aug 2014, 11:34
Great pixel art.
rnlf
rnlf26 Aug 2014, 13:12
Nice setting! Not sure why I needed the newspaper for the glass shards though. I was quite a bit shocked when the shotgun guy suddenly stood in front of me!
Reverend Speed26 Aug 2014, 13:14
Got the good ending! Great accomplishment for the jam - a nice, simple adventure. Great work!
Artamus26 Aug 2014, 13:30
Cool game, congrats!
Druid
Druid26 Aug 2014, 17:58
Wow, this remind me my last ld entry :D Anyway. Great work!
kyyrma26 Aug 2014, 18:06
Seconding that the walking speed is rather slow. I understand that a slower pace is good for building tension, but especially when you are unsure of what to do next it can get slightly tedious. A very solid first entry however, and I like the pixel art a lot!
DesignerNap
DesignerNap26 Aug 2014, 18:19
I like the style and presentation of this game. I got the good ending! :)
spotco
spotco27 Aug 2014, 05:44
Pretty good puzzle-click-everywhere-while-walking-around game!
The good ending didn't explain anything though :(
Nichii
Nichii27 Aug 2014, 13:32
The mood and atmosphere were excellent! However, the good and bad ending is kind of... eh, too short. But nevertheless, the atmosphere of this game were marvellous, I got scared when the robber spotted me!
enderargent
enderargentauthor27 Aug 2014, 14:15
Thanks a lot guys! ^^

I want to write a small introduction to make the player understand better the plot ^^
yodamaster27 Aug 2014, 16:37
Nice adventure. I like the retro-style gfx.
43iscoding
43iscoding27 Aug 2014, 22:34
This game gave me chills... Graphics remind me of "the last door" series. Very solid entry!
zkenshin
zkenshin28 Aug 2014, 00:39
Very nice mood (:
MechanicMoon
MechanicMoon28 Aug 2014, 23:07
Really nice history! Great art! Good work dude!
danidre14
danidre1430 Aug 2014, 20:26
Umm it's an okay game. Looks cool and all, but no music and gets boring fast. :\ Good luck though
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