Dolly

Overall★★★★★★★★★★3.49
Fun★★★★★★★★★★3.22
Innovation★★★★★★★★★★3.42
Theme★★★★★★★★★★3.21
Graphics★★★★★★★★★★4.01
Audio★★★★★★★★★★2.85
Humor★★★★★★★★★★2.46
Mood★★★★★★★★★★3.46
Coolness★★★★★★★★★★51%
Your very serious and atmospheric game has been interrupted by a rogue camera - don't fall off the screen!

Controls: WASD/Arrow Keys to move, Space to advance text and (and double jump).

Made by Stacia Lowery (@Slaysha), Jessica Hayley (@imjayhay), Matt Barr (@PeculiarMotion), and Brendon Steele (@BrendonSteeleIU).

Comments57

Pankoman
Pankoman9 Dec 2014, 01:51
Nice tribute, a little buggy but still good and the "ragdol" effect is funny.
Pankoman
Pankoman9 Dec 2014, 01:52
Nice tribute, a little buggy but still good and the "ragdoll" effect is funny.
friken
friken9 Dec 2014, 02:08
love the limbo vibe! nice work!
Krunoslav
Krunoslav9 Dec 2014, 02:11
Nice graphics, remember me Limbo. Nice gameplay in the begining, but when you die too many times it get very slow. (maybe too many polygones?)
I liked the textbox too.
Caspila9 Dec 2014, 02:17
Requires some polishing in the physics. The art style when the lights are turned down is very pretty. Nice idea though.
Olive
Olive9 Dec 2014, 02:41
Love the story idea of everything off camera dies and seeing behind the scenes of the set in the cardboard world. I am a very biased player when it comes to crafty style games. They get me every time. I love the style and physics of the character. I like the simple ambiance of the audio but maybe a little bit more background music or sound effects would be nice. Fix the glitches and you have a great game!
cxsquared
cxsquared9 Dec 2014, 02:45
Nice idea and really cool animations. The controls and physics could be tightened up a bit. Nice work.
Arovoid
Arovoid9 Dec 2014, 02:45
Fun take on a very known horror game!
eerongal
eerongal9 Dec 2014, 02:45
I really like the graphics. As others have said, reminds me of limbo!
jcsirron
jcsirron9 Dec 2014, 03:02
This was rather novel. I enjoyed how the camera changed from atmospheric to cardboard-y. I also like how the player kinda just fell apart when they went off screen. Nice work.
SpartanIceCream
SpartanIceCream9 Dec 2014, 03:28
Very nice graphics style , animations, and mood but I'm just having trouble seeing where it fits in with the LD theme.
WhiteVoidia
WhiteVoidiaauthor9 Dec 2014, 03:33
@SpartanIceCream, we took the "screen" to be the actual camera view. If you fall off the "screen" then you die. Hence the taking place all on one screen. A bit of a stretch I know, but we wanted to do something different :P

@Everyone else: thank you so much! The physics are a bit wonky we know, we wanted to make it less sticky but couldn't get it in the time frame. If it makes you feel better, though, you can pretend it's a shoddily-implemented wall-grab mechanic.
SinistraGames9 Dec 2014, 03:47
Can't say it personally hit home on the theme. But, given the controversy on the theme, I'm guessing everyone's pretty split on the idea of the theme, and you should just interpret it any way you like, so that's not the biggest issue!

I liked that it changed from the "Limbo-esque" style to something colorized, and with quite some neat art-design. One flaw is the extremely unforgiving checkpoint, haha!
mrhill9 Dec 2014, 03:55
Great game, my favorite so far :D
March9 Dec 2014, 04:03
Very nice mood. I like the graphics.
Boracho9 Dec 2014, 04:14
URGH! THAT CHECKPOINT!!! complaining aside, this was a neat little game. Definitely unforgiving though, but that's a matter of opinion I guess. Graphics pretty cool, controls nice and that death animation was pretty silly(in a good way). I could see this being a fun time killer at work.
ItyBity8Bit9 Dec 2014, 04:38
I really like the art style both the LIMBO and the cardboard box. You may want to choose either “try not to die” or “die to get past an obstacle” and stick with it in your game design.
oscarabraham9 Dec 2014, 05:27
Really cool graphics. Simple but fun enough mechanic. Hey, at least you tried to do something interesting with the theme. Must people just limited themselves to do games in one screen without using the theme to make their games more interesting.
brendonsteeleiu9 Dec 2014, 06:37
When I use the wall mechanic there is no pretending. I use it to control my descent in the final sections of the game.

@Everyone: Thanks for all of the awesome feedback guys!
barry.p.evans9 Dec 2014, 07:14
SOLID GAME! i loved all of it until i lagged out D: super awesome vibe to it though!
cmdr
cmdr9 Dec 2014, 07:39
The take on the theme was really creative and I loved the cardboard style to go along with it. I got a little stuck on some of the walls but I had fun playing nonetheless!
Domicuc9 Dec 2014, 09:34
You kill me mate. This game is really have my type of graphics.. i love style and innovation!
if you have some time also check my project mate x)
Lissaring
Lissaring9 Dec 2014, 10:06
I love the direction you took the theme in! Though I kept stumbling over and getting stuck on body parts, haha.
CAT_IN_THE_DARK_WOOD9 Dec 2014, 12:03
Very interesting gameplay, it's cool when you see your own corpses, but uncool when you begin to stuck in them, and level becomes too difflicult because of your previous mistakes.
And in my opinion that's not a gameplay element. You should have thought about it.
Threstle9 Dec 2014, 12:26
Nice game ! The animations are pretty neat. ;) but could have used some sound effects, and I'm not getting how this is related to the theme. :/
Murchurl
Murchurl9 Dec 2014, 12:37
Quite an interesting concept! Love the animation and art!
SIMON_SIMON9 Dec 2014, 14:11
Great art style ! Loved the mood of the game, reminds me of And Yet it Moves :-)

The idea is nice too. Maybe you could've played a little more with the camera movements, to surprise the player.

Awesome ! Would love to play more.
tMalicet
tMalicet9 Dec 2014, 14:24
Nice concept. I like the mood.
I had to stop though, because the FPS went really low.
allurious
allurious9 Dec 2014, 15:28
Nice stylish game. Love the concept. Checkpoint is kind of far away for such a relentless camera. The exploding ragdoll is epic. Not sure how it's related to the theme though.
kruemelkeksfan9 Dec 2014, 16:39
A bit difficult, but good idea!
Various time I got stuck in a dead-body-pile in a difficult spot :O
Havi
Havi9 Dec 2014, 16:46
Nice game! Reminds me of Limbo :p
PeculiarMotion9 Dec 2014, 17:25
For those who are confused about how it relates to the theme "Entire Game on One Screen," It's because your character has to stay on the screen in order to live.
nuno
nuno9 Dec 2014, 17:59
great surprise with the camera :)
NeithR
NeithR9 Dec 2014, 18:20
Nice concept ;).
Seeing from the serious atmosphere into cardboard, feel like seeing a behind the scene of the few color atmosphere ;).
SivGoose9 Dec 2014, 20:20
LOVE THIS GAME! reminds me of limbo a lot. Great fun to play!
Pestel Crew9 Dec 2014, 20:26
That's interesting. Good atmosphere. Horror =)
ben_pxlplz9 Dec 2014, 20:44
I love the cardboard level! Very funny! Great idea. It's a bit brutal though. Are there any checkpoints?
gogo1994329 Dec 2014, 20:56
A very interesting game, love the idea of the camera going rouge. Also the idea with the cartboards was great :D Nice game overall.
brendonsteeleiu9 Dec 2014, 21:03
@ben_pxlplz: There are 2 checkpoints.

@everone: Loving the feedback guys, and the honesty.
DiegoHenriquez
DiegoHenriquez9 Dec 2014, 21:08
It was pretty fun, and I like the art-style. I also like the bouncy animations when moving. It's pretty hard, but I like the challenge.
AMS9 Dec 2014, 21:16
The graphical effect of the light is awesome, it was stunning when I discovered it was not a game with black and grey colors, great mechanic, I love it!
TheMeorch
TheMeorch9 Dec 2014, 22:05
Great execution of a cool idea. It could use more forgiving checkpoints, and it would be nice to be able to perform a full jump while wall-clinging. Nice work!
joelthebergman
joelthebergman10 Dec 2014, 02:46
Awesome feel. Super challenging. Really glad you added checkpoints haha
hexagore
hexagore10 Dec 2014, 20:58
The audio and art really work well together, plus original take on the theme... not seen any others do that yet!
sP0CkEr211 Dec 2014, 03:50
really like this idea - controls got stuck a few time - adding to my play again list - thanks
DonovanWu
DonovanWu13 Dec 2014, 23:10
There is much innovation on art style and gameplay. Nice work!
ChuiGum
ChuiGum16 Dec 2014, 22:13
5 Star Theme and Innovation, awesome job! One of the best games I've played so far. Just needs Music :)
rjhunter17 Dec 2014, 02:35
I'm looking forward to this game, but the Mac download seems to be corrupted -- none of my unzipping programs like it. Is it meant to be 14,394,916 bytes or perhaps more?
apiotrw17 Dec 2014, 08:27
Nice artstyle
ilokimo17 Dec 2014, 19:57
Overall very good entry. Lovely art and beautiful mood.
Si1ver17 Dec 2014, 20:05
Fantastic theme interpritation
Visuals are also awesome!
Limbo-style meets Non-Limbo-style
PapyPilgrim
PapyPilgrim23 Dec 2014, 16:49
I got stuck into a wall. Twice.
gameattack26 Dec 2014, 10:31
Awesome game!I enjoyed playing!!!
Vaclav
Vaclav29 Dec 2014, 13:27
The girl has borken into pieces!! Nooooo!

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