Very intersting story. The music whilst I really enjoyed it stopped after a while and restarted just once each day. Nice interpreation of the theme too.
I gave it a shot, made it through to the end, but the commas and phrasing produced a rhythm that I found to be rather laborious, filled with too many pauses. But maybe my mind simply isn't in a poetic mood at the moment; it is a rather subjective affair.
The ambient sounds upon beginning particular scenes was a nice touch, though.
Great story and music, both made me shiver! Also a good use of other sounds. I finally regreted my decission, but didn't play again because I dind't want to change the path I took.
Just one slight thing, I would prefer for the music to never stop (except in the mornings, I liked it when just the wind flew).
Excellent music and mood! This is just not my kind of game. the poetic writing I found hard to follow, but I naturally have issues following a text only story. For someone else, I can see them enjoying the story, but all I could do was enjoy the soundtrack. Good thing it's a great soundtrack!
This is really clever, really well written! It's been a long time since I read any poetry so it took me a while to get into it.
I imagine the game would be a lot more accessible with some artwork scrolling in the background to match the mood and illustrate what's happening at each point.
You perfectly captured the atmosphere of war-time research and development, where everybody works on their small part in isolation and nobody gets to see the big picture besides a few important, high-ranking people.
The game asks some tough questions. I'd like to think I'd be able to 'do the right thing' in such a situation, but it's impossible to know for sure.
I'm really not into twine like games. Have to say it is the first time I finish one :D At the end it was a pleasing experience for me. Especially liked that for once I could relax while playing a LD game. Thank you.
Amazing music! I found it hard to follow the story, and it was hard to tell what my decisions were doing, though this is probably my fault more than the game. However, the mood and music alone was enough for me to enjoy the experience. Good job!
I really enjoyed the music! The text was nice too, I became a bit text-overloaded after a while, but that says more about me than the game. Nice job :)
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The ambient sounds upon beginning particular scenes was a nice touch, though.
Just one slight thing, I would prefer for the music to never stop (except in the mornings, I liked it when just the wind flew).
I imagine the game would be a lot more accessible with some artwork scrolling in the background to match the mood and illustrate what's happening at each point.
You perfectly captured the atmosphere of war-time research and development, where everybody works on their small part in isolation and nobody gets to see the big picture besides a few important, high-ranking people.
The game asks some tough questions. I'd like to think I'd be able to 'do the right thing' in such a situation, but it's impossible to know for sure.
I normally do not play text adventures, but I had the feeling it was too linear, it did not feel like a game too me.
-Hando