Flight

by norgg
Overall★★★★★★★★★★3.19
Fun★★★★★★★★★★2.96
Innovation★★★★★★★★★★2.83
Theme★★★★★★★★★★3.18
Humor★★★★★★★★★★3.20
Mood★★★★★★★★★★3.48
Coolness★★★★★★★★★★45%
I've been pretty busy travelling this weekend, so here's a Twine tale about going on a trip.

To access the source, just download the page and import it into http://twinery.org/2/

screenshot

Comments10

FerraWare20 Apr 2015, 02:19
Cool text-game, but a little flat and short overall. 10/10 would sleep every chance they have
PaperBlurt
PaperBlurt20 Apr 2015, 06:20
Ha. It wraps up nice in the end.
RobotParking
RobotParking20 Apr 2015, 12:41
AND THAT, MY DEAR, IS ~HOW BABIES ARE MADE~
steboots26 Apr 2015, 20:24
And there you go, that's how it's done.
ianh
ianh27 Apr 2015, 10:12
Short and sweet!
BabaJaga27 Apr 2015, 15:38
Whaaat?! That was unexpected :D
freeholdgames27 Apr 2015, 17:15
Wonderfully evocative. Short but sweet.
Chaoseed10 May 2015, 14:16
That was...odd. I'm not sure I really buy it; I mean, the 'ending' made me roll my eyes. Still! You actually tried something unusual, and I cannot stress enough how happy that makes me. ;)
Jwatt11 May 2015, 16:09
I don't really have much to say about this. It was short and the writing was kinda unique. Usually these story games are full of mundanities to obviously pad the playing time, this is more what they should be.

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