Cute and charming, however I'm having trouble getting the feel of 'An Unconventional Weapon'. I can kinda see it in how you 'control' the human, but it feels weak.
Also, there's not any good way to get a feel for how you're doing.
Interesting take on the theme. It was nice to see that each of the paths was meaningful. Can't say I was able to beat it though. Regardless, well done.
It was charming and fun, but the website was a little hard to navigate and work around... which I don't really think should happen in an interactive fiction. I am a fan of the IF genre, and overall, this does not disappoint. Well done.
I have made all the images smaller so that it fits better in the screen, @ironleonem. @rg_rem I am super impressed with 125 love! Have updated the stats page, I was too burned out to actually count up the value last night.
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Also, there's not any good way to get a feel for how you're doing.
I was thinking about a twine game too. Was nice to see someone how made it. It's a pretty nice idea!
Had some funny bits in your writing though.
Maybe a bit slow sometimes, but the premise is nice...
Always great when people design their twines.
@rg_rem I am super impressed with 125 love! Have updated the stats page, I was too burned out to actually count up the value last night.