Dark Entries

Overall★★★★★★★★★★2.89
Fun★★★★★★★★★★2.62
Theme★★★★★★★★★★3.59
Humor★★★★★★★★★★2.32
Mood★★★★★★★★★★3.32
Coolness★★★★★★★★★★74%
Dark Entries is Twine game about a woman who has just recently been turned into a vampire and is just trying to figure out how to survive during one night in 1986. This is both my first Ludum Dare game and my first Twine game.

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Comments18

ziege
ziege24 Aug 2015, 20:49
Well written. I enjoyed it quite a bit.
vividhelix
vividhelix24 Aug 2015, 21:56
I liked the "toy with him" part, fits very well with the theme!
LandoSystems
LandoSystems25 Aug 2015, 01:42
Great Game. I enjoyed seeing what was going to come next.

I did get into a stint where I didn't have any choices, other than that, great game.
van noctar25 Aug 2015, 02:18
Why not, the logic good working.

You could put images with the text. :)
A_K_25 Aug 2015, 02:24
Didn't get it, sorry
Fanatrick
Fanatrick25 Aug 2015, 02:32
Very good for the ratings, I've played through the whole thing even though it looks much more suited for the female public. The part where you mentioned the club was "bitchin'" got a kick out of me :)
Josh H25 Aug 2015, 02:33
Very disturbing! It was a well written story. Good job.
defacid
defacid25 Aug 2015, 05:55
This excellently captured the theme, and the story was solid, but I wish that there was more GAME to it. Each of the decisions were essentially one of two extremes to choose from and I would have liked to feel like I had more options and more control.
Inateno
Inateno25 Aug 2015, 10:03
Loved it, got my attention from the beginning to the end :)
BaseCase25 Aug 2015, 14:55
I liked it! I don't play a lot of Twine games so I'm not sure what the field overall is like, but this had some nice moments. Good humor and the chase scene was exciting too :)
lkpridgeon26 Aug 2015, 00:43
A nice game/interactive novel with great writing.
Ershany
Ershany27 Aug 2015, 01:51
This game gave off a really good mood :) Writing is good!
echokain27 Aug 2015, 17:26
Really well written, good job!
HotBoxGames
HotBoxGames31 Aug 2015, 00:34
Very well written! Extremely immersive & quite dark! Would be nice to see some branched endings or further story - this is really great for your first Twine game!
mubox
mubox31 Aug 2015, 02:12
Very nice text. ^^
BlackQuiltro
BlackQuiltro6 Sep 2015, 13:56
Very well writen and captures the theme well. For me it needed more options and branching to make it more fun. It was too linear.
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