it's cute, but a little underwhelming. Maybe I missed something, but the game feels a little light on interactivity. There's nothing inherently wrong with having a game which favors story over gameplay, but I found the story kind of disappointing. There only seemed to be five panels, and they didn't really do much to establish likable characters, significant conflict, or a satisfying end.
Haha, loved the bit where you broke the panels. I played it a couple of times but didn't notice any different storylines, which would've made it even more awesome. Great job on the animation!
Very clever mechanic of having to click certain points in the picture to progress the panels. I also liked how things / people could move from one panel to another. Cool stuff! :)
That was hilarious. I actually thought the comic was over after five panels when I read your comment, pavel_insight. Lovely whatever this is. The ending was great, earned you another humor point :) Multiple endings based on decisions would be a cool addition to make it more gamey, though.
Haha funny comic :] Cool humor, but i had to launch the game 3 times before i understood i was not clicking at the right place to display the next frame :) it lacks a bit of interaction, but that's a good idea.
Cute story! Nice little concept for a game jam. Would have been cool to have a little more branching depending on what you clicked, but still very cool for a compo entry!
Nice concept! Fun entry, I wish there was more! I could read this for hours. I wish there was either more interaction (i.e. dragging items around) or less (i.e. give a more clear indication of where you have to click to progress the slides). You really caught my attention when the character broke out of the slide, this idea truly has potential! Solid entry!
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My criticism would be that this is not really a game, imho. There are no options.
I personally don't care, though, as long as I have fun.
@conormn, I removed scrolling, page is full-sized now. :)
@NickMakesGames, actually, there are nine panels, not five. ;)
Multiple endings based on decisions would be a cool addition to make it more gamey, though.
it was nicely done!
maybe you could do some more i wished to see more :)