There are no Monsters outside

Overall★★★★★★★★★★3.03
Fun★★★★★★★★★★2.79
Innovation★★★★★★★★★★2.72
Theme★★★★★★★★★★3.61
Humor★★★★★★★★★★2.64
Mood★★★★★★★★★★2.97
Coolness★★★★★★★★★★75%
For my first game ever I made a little twine-story-game-thingy.

Enjoy :)

Tools: Twine

Comments18

Rocketship
Rocketship25 Aug 2015, 11:48
Some good writing there, didn't feel like a chore to read this. Well done!
pta2002
pta200225 Aug 2015, 17:42
Pretty nice. I enjoyed the story.
JackDegree25 Aug 2015, 20:02
I always love me a nice Twine game :), and yours is a really good first! Make more games!
conrad123
conrad12325 Aug 2015, 20:47
There are some ways where the story goes on forever.
Rulrite
Rulrite26 Aug 2015, 04:32
You did a great job with this one, especially seeing as it's your first game! I just had to play through it multiple times to see the different paths. The happy ending left me sort of puzzled, but in a good way!
NoWandStudios30 Aug 2015, 10:30
Cool story! Reminds me at "Horns" of Joe Hill
Strike
Strike30 Aug 2015, 11:30
Something very different from all other entries. Interestingly, it fits the them perfectly.
madmaw30 Aug 2015, 11:32
Really nice short story. I enjoyed reading it and was a little disappointed when it ended actually. Nice work.
xvw
xvw30 Aug 2015, 19:29
An unusual entry here!
Really nice! :)
KevinWorkman
KevinWorkman30 Aug 2015, 23:23
This was enjoyable. Would have been cool to see some pictures!
Crowbeak
Crowbeak2 Sep 2015, 04:00
This could do with proofreading, but I love the thing about maybe your period is a week early again, right off the bat. ^_^ Instantly sets the character as female, and I am all for pushing guys' comfort levels on stuff like that. The note to self injections are also a nice realistic touch. Enjoyable overall.
congusbongus
congusbongus4 Sep 2015, 11:27
At first I thought it was a clone of that period trine, but then horns! hahaha! Good stuff
crucknuk
crucknuk13 Sep 2015, 17:13
Interesting approach of the theme. I always enjoyed novel games. Nice little story you got there and good work.
WubAlliance
WubAlliance14 Sep 2015, 13:23
What a bizarre yet entertaining entry! Very fun, nice take on the theme. Good job!
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