You really made a effort on the texts! Would have been nice to have some more features as just gowing right or left or press a button, but I really like text adventures!
This was a really well-done text adventure. I think it's the writing that did it! I wish there was more branching paths that didn't quite so obviously meet up again. Also, it's a bit of a shame that there's no real ending. well done!
Heh! Not much to say about this without spoiling it for everyone else. I feel foolish, but in a nice way. The writing is good (though I caught a typo: "roon" should be "room").
Not much to it in terms of gameplay, but it's an entertaining story, and wouldn't work nearly as well in a non-interactive format.
Beautifully written. I really enjoyed it! I can't even think on how to improve the experience. I think it's perfect as it is. Maybe some background music would be nice? Great job!
Would have been nice to have some more features as just gowing right or left or press a button, but I really like text adventures!