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Nice game! Cool atmosphere!

Awesome graphics and storytelling

Very nice!

Great game for the first time!

good for your first game like the story as well

Good small story telling game,
Really atmospherics.
May have been just me with my crappy mouse, but I had some difficulties with texts, disappearing instantly.
Really good first project.

Love the graphics and music. The text seemed to disappear really fast for me though, and sometimes I couldn't click again on an object to reread the description.

Really good concept for story telling

I love the art style too

The graphics look great! Had a problem where the text would disappear too quick for me to read

Great atmosphere :)
Great Graphics :)

And no i am a bit sad about the end; poor girl.

Great atmosphere :)
Great Graphics :)

And now i am a bit sad about the end; poor girl.

Nice game!

A nice pice of Art !!

Nice !

Hmm I got stuck a few times I tried this game. Not really sure how to progress in this one.

The room filling itself up is a lovely idea.

Unfortunately I got stuck around here https://gyazo.com/6909603820be26f663ee156c09e5b7a6

Also, the text disapearway too fast on my computer too!

Cool little game with a great atmosphere! very melancholy and a bit creepy. The ending comes a bit suddenly, but it's a great plot-twist! Keep up the good work!

Guys, thank you for the feedback! We know about the text issue and we will try to fix as soon as possible :)

Really nice art, and good use of the theme. I found it hard to progress and wasn't really clear if I had finished or not at the end. I would have liked more of a puzzle, or more interactivity.

Good atmosphere.Just some bug. I was over the desk when it appeared so I was unable to move. Also the texts disappear too quickly we don't have time to read. These are just details, the game is very good.

I love the style and atmosphere in this. The sound is pretty well done, too.

I'd love to know more about what happened to her. She seems like a pretty intriguing character...

She's got into coma, guys :)

Great Atmosphere you created! Well done!

The art and storytelling where really well done. I wish the text would stay on the screen a little longer. I'm also not sure if I saw everything but couldn't see to get any more story. I wish it would have fleshed out a more full story. But overall really nice work. I quite enjoyed it.

Nice graphics and athmosphere

Great art and music. I like how the story is told to the player at a slow pace, giving time to catch with the surreal experience. I hope you can get rid of those bugs so more people could get to the end of the story. Great work.

Good game with very interesting graphics solution! Amazing job!

I love the art style of the game- very cool. It works well- I got stuck because the bed loaded in under me.
Your descriptions were good and the ending was unexpected. I like the usage of the them "One Room" -the hospital room or the room of memories in her mind :) Nice work! Keep up the good work!

The atmosphere in this is great, thanks to the music and visuals. I did try to play this multiple times because some glitch or bug stopped things from happening, however I couldn't figure out what to do when I hit a certain point.

Really nice art!

Really loved the art of the game.

Very very moody, and the graphics and narrative are very compact, so good work :D

Hi, as pointed out by others, you should at least explain what is going on in the game, because the text disappear very fast. The good side is that you made good graphics and atmophere. Keep working on it!

Nice graphics and an interesting way to explore a room. I didn't really get stuck, I just kept clicking

Great atmosphere. I love the music.

Impressive aesthetic and strange mood. A really good project, but I struggle hard because I have no clue about what I am supposed to do. A weird experience. Well done ++

looks amazing, great voxel style artwork

Love the art and the story, good job!

Besides the bugs, really liked the mood of the game. I like these storytelling games very much.

Sound and art are quite something. Had bit of a problem too fast texts and bit too ambiguous about how to proceed.

I enjoyed the aesthetics and colors of the game. Nice work!

Colouring and audio build a sweet harmony.
In the web version I did not figure out how to interact.
Will try win tomorrow.

Great work with the graphics and story telling :)!

Nice game! Like art style.

Nice art style, and atmosphere. Like some other users, I experienced problems getting the text to stay visible though.

Really, the music and the atmosphere, it gets you into the game. The voxels graphics I loved, I wish they had more time to see what else they could tell us. Very good game, excellent work.

Congratulations on your first game, I hope it is the first of many. ♥

The storytelling was indeed really interesting. Amazing graphics too

It was pretty much random clicking for me but I got there in the end. The subtitle timing could be fixed with just adding a click to close thing instead of timing them.

Nice game.I like the graphics and the sound.

Hi! This looks interesting, nice-nice-nice art and sound =)

Awesome art here, seems like personal game here?

That ending was unexpected...oh boy! xD It was tricky to click the fornitures to see the text, also it disappeard too fas to read it sometimes. Good story and concept to tell that story, please continue developing this. Good job!

Interesting graphics, sound and overall mood, kind of weird story and ending, though :O

Good atmosphere and graphic, also liked the narrative... But where is the gameplay?
Still a good work.

Story in the game reminded me of Black Mirrors San Junipero episode.
Top tier aesthetic. Ambient music just make your perfect artwork more vibrant and deep.
This kind of games are new type of art.

I like the graphics, really nice, also the sound and atmosphere, and the storytelling mechanics is quite interesting, but I feel like it is lacking something, maybe some other mechanic that interacts with the story telling. Anyways, nice job.

Great art, classic point and click formula. Dont need more

Nice game and really cool concept! The graphics were good. The subtitles timing issue was kinda annoying. Nice twist at the end though.

The ending gave me chills. Great game bro!

That's a good start. Very nice graphics and sound.
But hard to get to the end (or I was misfortuned).
I also managed to get her out of the room :)

Cool and simple storytelling through things

Neat graphics and music, but i haven't finished the game, because stuck twice.

This was a very interesting game to say the least. It's visually impressive and I enjoyed the storytelling atmosphere the music gave. Good job!

Great atmosphere. Nice work!

I like the atmosphere and graphics. A good storytelling.

Probably the best looking game I've seen on here so far!
The gameplay was somewhat lacking(from what I played) After trying to click on the doormat I got stuck in the door and nothing happends.

Nice way to present a story, and a great graphics. Would be cool to see a whole adventure in this style.
I must say the table doesn't look like in need of cleaning, even later in the game :)

I found it nice and calming. It is a good exploration.

Wow. Great. We made a story driven poitn n click ourselves so we can really appreciate your work, and it is good !

Really good looking game, I loved the way, the object appeared, it made much more sense, in the end.

Great atmosphere!
The ending seemed a bit forced, but otherwise the storytelling was great. Like the idea of what the things a person surrounds themself with can say about them.

very atmospheric

Really great art! I wish the view was bigger so I could see it in more detail. I didn't really understand how the gameplay was supposed to work, though.

Oh man, I will not spoil it, but the flicker, oh flicker... I trembled of a second there... Deep. Would like more like this. Good job and thank you for your game.

I really like the graphics and atmosphere! the narrative was nice. I think I beat it? haha

That ending tho. Really, congratulations!

Very moody and quick, with a feels at the end. Lovely aesthetics good stuff

I tend to avoid story games but you made very digestible pieces of text and the mystery feel was intriguing enough to keep me going.

Nice graphics and music.

Pretty short but interesting. Kinda sad too!
Good job!

Amazing atmosphere. I suspected something wasn't going to turn out happy in the end by the way some of those descriptions felt. Great job driving the narrative through interaction. I played it without reading your description so it was extra intriguing!

An interactive story. The atmosphere is very nice.

Nice work guys. I only got the complete ending the second time I played. The atmosphere is really good and the idea of decorating the room with memories original.
I found the walking a bit clunky, and it did not add anything to the gameplay. In my opinion, you could completely remove the character and let the player focus even more on the story, which is your strong point.
Anyway, I enjoyed it!

Great first game!

Great mood. I like the voxel based arts, it works well. I had some trouble with finding the last element, and my character was stuck. It's a bit short and without much to do. But story elements are great and the progressive appearance of furniture in the room goes well with the story. Keep up the good work !

It was hard to both read and keep the track of which object has popped up in the room so I ended up not reading the text at all. What was the game about? I really liked the graphics.

Cool! Great atmosphere (and fantastic music). I like that it's a kind of sophisticated "spot the difference" game. I felt the ending was a bit abrupt (and possibly a little heavy-handed), but I really enjoyed the experience!

This game was kind of a let-down to be honest. The mechanic of having new objects appear based on what you examine is an interesting way to present a narrative, but instead of using this to its full effect, the player only gets the barest hint of a story before having it all taken away for a ham-fisted twist ending. Sorry if this sounds a bit harsh, but this is about as emotionally effective as saying "Imagine a sad thing happening to a person. Isn't that tragic?"

On the technical side:
-I ran into a bug immediately on my first attempt: if you walk over to the poster and then examine it, the table appears on top of you and you can't move (I assumed this was game-breaking since I hadn't really seen what the game was going to be and restarted because of it)
-There are 2 different fullscreen buttons (one on the itch.io embed, and one in the Unity webgl export). You should probably try to set it up so that you only need one.

Nice art. I liked the little story it tells but it felt kind of rush at the end. Really good for a first time ;)

Nice idea!

Great audio which lends perfectly to the mood. The theme was well executed as well.

Спасибо! :) У вас тоже интересно, жалко только обрывается так скоро и резко.

Great atmosphere and graphics. Ending was super cliche.

Graphics are great and also the music! I loved the narrative element and all but I think that the storytelling felt too short and I think that with more time you can tell that same story in a more cohesive way.

Awesome graphics, and great poetry in game form haha, like the background music, couldn't read the last scene, but i liked the game in general.

I just had to add, i would love the character to walk in the room and interacting with objects (:

Nice work, btw

Really nice music and art. There are many misspelled words, I would run your text through a spellchecker. I have a similar mechanic in my game, discovering items as you go, but I think you guys managed to tell your story better. Some bugs with walking on top of walls and off the floor.

The game has a nice feel to it. It's a shame I could not get to the end.

I like the feeling that I get closer and connected to that character as the game goes by... I had fun interesting time reading the monologues on every object :)
It's like exploring something new and it got me curiouser and curiouser...
I got stuck and took a long time somewhere so I had to restart...
That aside, Nice take on the theme, Good job!

Impressive moody game, story-telling is well designed and the artstyle is unique and eye-candy. And audio is top notch too.

Very interesting.

Neat storytelling... Good job on trying out the narrative idea.

Yes! This was what I was aiming to achieve. This emotional, narrative story-telling is absolutely beautiful. I loved the art, the sounds and everything about this game. It's good, it's made in 72 hours and it's amazing. Great work everyone, hope to see more from you!

The idea behind the game is really interesting, it's a shame that it bugged out on me (each time I tried to play, an object became unclickable).

Pretty! Really neat storytelling.

Very interesting entry. Nice use of colour too!

Couple of spelling issues but they didn't really affect anything.

Nicely chosen objects/descriptions and good pacing make for an especially poignant ending. There seemed to be a few slight bugs in the object selection but the gorgeous aesthetics more than made up for them. Loved it!

Atmosphere is nice, storytelling is very good and grapchis looks original, but there's no actual gameplay.

It's definitely unique, short and sweet. It looks pretty, the music sounds nice. It could have had more content but what was there was polished. It wasn't much of a game. Yet me saying that is scraping the bottom of the barrel. Good luck in you're future games.

Beautiful game and very intriguing!
Congrats on your first project!

Very good job for the first project. The graphics are unique and interesting. I couldn't reach the end, but I really liked the mood. Good job!

Great sound and atmosphere!

Great sound and graphics! I like how things gradually started to take shape. Always fun with some skating story

great art style, I liked

Art style was awesome!

You just saw me playing your game live. You can watch it again here: https://youtu.be/AAa6rb4l3oI

You can also remove the information about stability from the game description, if the web version is now stable too :)

Really coll art style!

Awesome game, the music and the graphics really sucked me in. I liked the twist in the end as well.

I love the art style really much.
And at first I thought 'how can I escape the room' and than came this sad story about her dad and the tragical ending.
I like it! :)

I was rate nr. 200.
Hey, I liked your game it was actually fun.
You can improve the audio and the graphics at some point but overall not bad!
And please go and try out my game!

Short with (kinda)obvious ending, but the whole atmosphere, art style with sound design and narrative makes it really interesting experience

Nice art and nice atmosphere. It's a strange idea that maybe we didn't understand, but good job anyway!

Very nice entry, graphics are awesome, the text are great, and the concept is effective, great work !

Really neat game, I like the atmosphere and the art + the music gave a really unique experience.

Wow, the ending was a shocker! Very nice atmosphere, music and graphics were lovely.

Nice job!

Got stuck on a bed, no idea what to do, overall good graphics, gameplay is nonexistant

Great job! Love the art, music and story. Congrats!

i like the graphics! so minimalis. interesting story and sound!

Very cool way of storytelling. The music fit the mood really well, too.

I'd love to see this idea taken further!

The gameplay concept was a bit confusing at first but the storytelling was top notch plus I loved how the audio contributes to the overall atmosphere (Also I was totally not prepared for that ending).

First project! Damn awesome job, loved the art style and always respect tackling narrative in a game jam. I look forward to seeing more from you guys, keep up the good work :)

I didn't get to the final scene but enjoyed the atmosphere anyway. Great art style and color palette!

good art and atmosphere. didnt see an ending, so im thinking maybe a bug? good job though

Such a beautiful story telling ♥ with cute graphics. This is a nice piece of Art!!! Big congrats! This is a very good entry :D

Ooh, i like this, the graphics are absolutely gorgeous.

I really liked the overall mood of revealing the room object by object, and especially the twist of the final scene, though unfortunately it cut off the description of the final item i clicked and i couldn't read it.

This feels like a really nice start for an adventure game engine, i'd like to see it put to further use. And that this is your first project is really impressive! Great work!

It is absolutely stunning to hear this is your first entry. It is simply gorgeous, it is truly artistic. You caught the concept of art beautifully and the storytelling itself is awesome. To be frank I can't wait to hear more from you in the next LDs!

Great story. Well filed.

Really pretty graphics and great atmospheric music. I like how you embraced the one room theme but also built up a world in the storytelling.

Interesting unique experience, liked the way you told a story through the objects. Was an interesting narrative.

Nice little narrative game. I guess you could improve the colliders and some objects that are highlighted and don't trigger anything (the chair) but apart from that, great game. And that's your first time, congratulations!

High marks on graphics and mood especially! Loved the storytelling :)