Keyhole

by gord10

Overall★★★★★★★★★★3.21

Fun★★★★★★★★★★2.75

Innovation★★★★★★★★★★2.96

Theme★★★★★★★★★★3.42

Audio★★★★★★★★★★3.50

Mood★★★★★★★★★★4.04

Coolness★★★★★★★★★★55%

Game adaptation of the famous horror story, Keyhole. A short interactive horror story.

You will stay at an old hotel for tonight. The receptionist lady warns you about not to open the door or look through the keyhole of Room 103.

When you go upstairs, you hear a woman crying in that room. Will you indulge your curiosity?

I used my own interactive story system I developed for Interactive Horror Stories. 3D models are from Unity Asset Store and MakeHuman.

Genres: adventure

Tools: Unity

Comments17

Max Amaden13 Dec 2016, 18:46

Nice game! The spooky atmosphere definitely comes across strongly, it had me on edge the whole time. There are a few typos but other than that it's really, really good, keep up the good work!

efno13 Dec 2016, 18:55

It was nice, just enough spookyness thanks to the sound and the limiting vision of the keyhole. The gameplay was pretty simple and there was only really the option of experience the story or don't. I enjoyed it though.

Gord10author13 Dec 2016, 22:01

Thank you!

Yes, I get that bad English critique about my stories. English is not my primary language, I usually get proofreading help. But this time I could hardly finish the text at the deadline and hadn't a chance to get help. I'm going to update the game when my friend is not busy to help me.

fullmontis14 Dec 2016, 13:51

It was an interesting story with a creepy atmosphere. I enjoyed playing trough it.

tarcisiotm14 Dec 2016, 13:52

Nice job!

Really good atmosphere and I think you managed to deliver the horror/uneasiness feelings through the players.

Almax2714 Dec 2016, 14:20

Atmosphere was great excellent. The introduction was a good length, these kind of stories can drag on sometimes, but I felt the pacing was perfect here.

It would have been nice to see more dialogue tree branching and depth, but there was enough content to play through twice.

pcmxms14 Dec 2016, 17:29

Really spooky. Congrats on achieving such mood with so little tech.

BadPaul3414 Dec 2016, 18:02

Nice mood, Im sad that the story didn't last much more. Great job :)

popogames14 Dec 2016, 18:06

Nice game with cool creepy atmosphere. I was sad I knew the story so I knew the twist. :)

SUNFURY24 Dec 2016, 15:14

so I was staring at her eye? .___.

crap

ShuddaHaddaLottaFun29 Dec 2016, 03:23

I like this, it's a little short... feel like it could use more of a build up (though i don't know the original story). you could also do even more with sfx and audio/music to really build up the atmosphere.

Dynamic Panic Studios29 Dec 2016, 18:00

Coooooool. I really liked it. I am not a fan of anything text based but the bit of gameplay and the way the story came together was awesome. I appreciate this! Good job!

Tifu29 Dec 2016, 23:54

"I personally want you to feel bad" hee

Good adaptation of story, great atmosphere. Everything makes sense in the end! And no cliche jumpscare of her killing you in the end, huzzah!