FILEFICTION

Nice little story, I wish there was more to it, like some subplot or the viruses Mary mentioned.

Neat! I played through a few times, and got some different endings. I wish there were a little more interactivity, but you have great groundwork here for a really neat adventure.

Sunnray and Simonhutchinson! I might turn it into a complete adventure in the future, i would sure like too :) Thanks for the feedback.

Liked that you had different endings, which made me go back and try to see what else would be said with different selections. The art was also nicely done, think it worked well in setting the operating system vibe. Wish playthroughs were a bit longer but it's definitely a great start.

Well, there's potential here. What you have is promising, but it's obviously not a very long game. With a more elaborate story I'm sure it's something I'd pay for. But if you do continue the development of this game, try to find ways to knit the story paths together. The thing with interactive story games is that most of the work you put into the game won't be noticed by a player because he chooses a different path.

Great Job! the little characters that you created look very adorable, and I wish you are able to expand on this in the future

Interesting concept, giving voice to "computer characters".

You have the foundation for a neat adventure game here. Your three characters have distinct personalities, and the "drag a character to an application" gameplay could be expanded with additional applications, with the different characters interacting differently with these.

The variety of their talk was also a nice touch.

>Pam, Kay and Mary,
>all have their stories to tell.
>New Computer Friends.

Cute story, I agree with the others that it was nice with the diffrent endings, made me go back to check them out.

It was a nice little story. I liked the variety of endings. If there was more interactive things like some sounds, or viruses, or even making the game an entire computer would be better. But for a compo game, this was awesome!

Hehe, interesting. It's too short for many comments, though.