Closing In

Overall★★★★★★★★★★3.09
Fun★★★★★★★★★★3.19
Innovation★★★★★★★★★★2.71
Theme★★★★★★★★★★3.34
Mood★★★★★★★★★★3.24
Hi! This was my first time ever participating in a game jam, and I've been developing games for only about 2 months now. Also, I worked alone with a limited amount of time that I had in my hands, so... please be kind!
Closing In is a very simple and short game, where the objective is to get to the end of the level without dying (being crushed by the walls, or killed by enemies) and getting the highest score possible.

To gain score you need to kill enemies by jumping on top of them, and by collecting coins.

Good luck!

Controls:
Space - Jump
A,D or Left, Right Arrows - Move

Comments22

Ad3112 Aug 2018, 05:40
It was ok, it played well. The fact you can choose your screen and graphics is sweet. But in my squared screed some data were a little out of the screen. Also when I turned on very low definition my character was very fast, you may have to find a way to synchronize the game or something to make the speed depending on your chose of rhythm.
I played with the Linux version it was sweet to see people sharing on Linux.
Andrey Ugolnik15 Aug 2018, 00:05
Nice GameBoy console game style. I like it.
Phantom Dinosaur15 Aug 2018, 00:40
Consider uploading the build to somewhere else other than github. Downloading from github is tricky. Also, I see that you have the Assets and Library folders of your game included in your build. These are not needed. The Library folder is going to bulk up the download size by a lot.
Chris Coe
Chris Coe15 Aug 2018, 02:44
Well... I followed the directions on your GitHub page, got it downloaded, but running it gives me a "Failed to load mono" error. Couldn't run.
Luiza Engler
Luiza Englerauthor15 Aug 2018, 04:01
@chris-coe Sorry, I hadn't tested on Windows before. I'll try to fix that!
NNNIKKI
NNNIKKI16 Aug 2018, 13:00
Umm, there's only a Linux build??
Luiza Engler
Luiza Englerauthor16 Aug 2018, 14:09
@nnnikki Just added a Windows build. Sorry, I was fixing a bug and had to take it off for a while.
geekdrums
geekdrums16 Aug 2018, 15:38
Nice game! Simple concept, nice graphics and music. I had fun! Great work for your first jam!
Jajo
Jajo16 Aug 2018, 15:40
Simple, but a pretty nice game overall. It's a different take on a platformer, which is honestly great to see. My criticism of it is that collision feels off. For example, coins briefly stop the player, especially when falling on top of them. I recommend you do in future is tick the "Is Trigger" box in the editor and use the "OnTriggerEnter2D" method instead of "OnCollisionEnter2D" when you create collectible items. You might also find the "OnCollisionExit2D" method useful for preventing the player jumping in mid air. I found that if I walked off a platform without jumping, I could jump in the air.

TL;DR I have a few criticisms of the collision, but overall this is a solid entry, especially for your first Ludum Dare.
NNNIKKI
NNNIKKI16 Aug 2018, 17:46
Nice game! If this is your first game jam game, then congrats! My only problem with this game is that when there's a game over, you acn continue playing. APart from that, I enjoyed it! :smile: Also, why did you leave out the rating for audio and art? It was great!
Luiza Engler
Luiza Englerauthor16 Aug 2018, 19:45
@geekdrums Thank you! @jajo Thank you for the tip, I'll do that next time! @nnnikki Thanks! I left the rating for audio and art because I didn't create them.
jelbre16 Aug 2018, 22:08
Overall simple but fun game! The artstyle and the music are great and fit well with the game. The monster collisions could be inproved a bit because I felt that you could sometimes die even when landing on top (corner) of monsters.
mrsylar59
mrsylar5916 Aug 2018, 22:20
Neat game for a first game jam, it feels like a finished game. The screen reducing on you make for a good sense of oppression and force you to move quicker. I really liked the color palette you chose which give some uniqueness to your game. I just found it strange to be able to keep moving when a monster cought you. Overall great entry, keep it up for next LDs!
bbaf
bbaf16 Aug 2018, 22:43
Small and pretty game. Good luck with future voting!
Kivuli17 Aug 2018, 19:36
Really enjoyed it! A nice small game with very nice aesthetics!
CristiHKJ
CristiHKJ17 Aug 2018, 20:25
Nice game! Really cool and interesting! :D
Megalink
Megalink17 Aug 2018, 21:29
Short and fun game! Very easy to understand, instructions are well explained. Collecting coins and killing enemies was very satisfying. Music fit the mood of the game very well, I also loved the colour palette. Great job!
konsumopfer7717 Aug 2018, 22:12
pretty atmospheric id say. also the first game that i didnt had to close with alt+f4 ;: D even thou some of them were also made with unity.
konsumopfer7717 Aug 2018, 22:12
pretty atmospheric id say. also the first game that i didnt had to close with alt+f4 ;: D even thou some of them were also made with unity.
CliffracerX
CliffracerX18 Aug 2018, 01:57
Solid little platformer! Movement felt a little clunky at times (especially around pickups & enemies - do they possibly have non-Trigger colliders on them?), but enjoyable nevertheless.

Theme use isn't quite what I was expecting, but it works. The functioning menu system is a nice touch, too - it's often all too easy to ship without one in LD's time constraints. All in all, it's just all-around *decent*, which is a good way to be for Ludum Dare.

(Also, hello fellow Linux user! :smile:)
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