All Alone, On This Plateau.

Overall★★★★★★★★★★3.22
Fun★★★★★★★★★★2.03
Innovation★★★★★★★★★★2.71
Theme★★★★★★★★★★3.93
Graphics★★★★★★★★★★4.18
Audio★★★★★★★★★★3.27
Mood★★★★★★★★★★4.01
Oh! Look at that, a lovely plant! A plant of life, and prosperity. A plant for our future.
(Inspired by "The Giving Tree" by Shel Silverstein)2.png

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Tags: #altgame
Genres: visual novel
Tools: GameMaker

Comments27

cqcumbers
cqcumbers3 Dec 2018, 03:39
The art and sound design are very satisfying, and it's a cool way to tell a story, there just isn't much gameplay or story there as far as I can tell. I think this could do well with a longer, more complex narrative and possibly minigames and branching storylines.
Rolly
Rolly3 Dec 2018, 03:49
Well, it was nice to have a little break between 2 hack'n'slash !
mahalis
mahalis3 Dec 2018, 04:01
Agreed, the art is fantastic - I'd love to see more in this style. Not a whole lot of gameplay to speak of, but it's a contemplative-feeling piece.
attrition
attrition3 Dec 2018, 04:28
While more of a short story than a game, it is well written and the artwork hits the right tone for the work. It feels very appropriate. Nice job.
brgarnet173 Dec 2018, 05:09
Art is very well done, along with the writing. This seems like a darker version of the Giving Tree to me. Was Shel Silverstein an inspiration for this game?
foxor3 Dec 2018, 05:14
A nice little visual novel. I appreciate the illustration as well.
Anyonebacon
Anyonebaconauthor3 Dec 2018, 05:16
@brgarnet17 For sure, when I thought of the idea I thought it might be a bit on-the-nose to The Giving Tree. I made sure to credit him on all the pages and stuff.
SomewhatInfinite
SomewhatInfinite3 Dec 2018, 05:55
Loved the art and sound design. Not really much to say about game-play wise, but not all games need to be super in depth.
timeshapers
timeshapers3 Dec 2018, 06:59
I think you missed out on being rated on humor, that ending was funny.
bubblewandgames
bubblewandgames3 Dec 2018, 07:19
A really powerful small experience - great work!! Quick note, I don't know if this is exclusive to me but I couldn't play on the itch build as pressing space moved the screen down rather than starting the game (Gamejolt worked fine however)
SanyingLi
SanyingLi3 Dec 2018, 07:21
The art is very catchy and nice. I also like the way of storytelling. More story would make this game even better, for now after playing I feel not played enough.
Anyonebacon
Anyonebaconauthor3 Dec 2018, 07:27
@bubblewandgames Hey! Thanks for the support! But also it could just be a stupid thing where you have to click inside the game first :/ Sorry. Glad you got to play it though!
Yirggzmb
Yirggzmb3 Dec 2018, 07:33
It's refreshing to see interactive experiences in these events. I love the art and the story works well. Over all, really well done.
nusan
nusan3 Dec 2018, 09:17
Lovely story and visual works very well. It's a bit sad but also strangely resilient at the end. Having to click with the mouse to valid the sacrifices was impactful, but a bit strange as it's the keyboard that's used for playing the story. I think there should be a way to play with only keyboard and only mouse. Great works!
MaFancy3 Dec 2018, 10:31
Very interesting experience. I lave the artwork, it really makes the idea complete. It does feel well thought through and that is hard to achieve in this type of visual novel. And again i just need to repeat how well it is drawn :) good job :)
Daniel_Abeleira
Daniel_Abeleira3 Dec 2018, 11:24
Nice game! I like the art and sound and the game idea
arkiruthis
arkiruthis3 Dec 2018, 14:57
I love to come across something like this once in a while on LD. I'd consider just silence rather than the sound when you hit space to make it a little more poignant. Very well done.
BoltKey3 Dec 2018, 20:21
This is not a game, goal of Ludum Dare is to make a game.

That aside, I liked it. The sound effects and atmosphere were nice. And the message too.
Anyonebacon
Anyonebaconauthor3 Dec 2018, 22:07
@boltkey Maybe you're right, but yknow. It was made like a game :) Thanks
Jnightlight4 Dec 2018, 00:18
Really liked the story,and the art was very pretty. It's packaged together extremely well!
Andrea
Andrea4 Dec 2018, 19:40
Just... Beautiful!
Thank you :')
ryzy27
ryzy275 Dec 2018, 13:59
That was fun and beautiful, thanks!
planschi6 Dec 2018, 21:45
Very nice ! for me personaly it would be a better end if it ended when they took the stump! But nice message!!
garygreen
garygreen8 Dec 2018, 15:37
I enjoyed the narrative & the art was very stylish.
Megalink
Megalink9 Dec 2018, 10:50
This is a lovely story! The background ambience really assisted in building a great atmosphere. I also liked the art style. Good work!
Arvejeitor12 Dec 2018, 16:40
Art is nice ,but the gameplay isn't there... it just tells a story without any choices for the player. Like a visual novel with only one choice.

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