Really nice use of the theme, I like games that get kind of meta like this. It reminded me a bit of the Stanley Parable. Like others said, music and sound would help with the mood, but on the other hand, it does kind of fit the theme better without it :)
I enjoyed this. I especially enjoyed it when I realized that I had just looped myself through the conversation with the Lord. Very clever how you did that. Not really a lot can go wrong with a good old text adventure like this. Would have liked some music or sound effects but this was so short it wasn't a real bother. I did like how as you progress through the loop the clickable text color changes when you hover over it from light blue to pink (note I am using f.lux so it might be some other color than pink and I just can't tell sorry!) helps break up the monotony of the same text repeating.
Very minimalistic, but hey you used your skills and time, participated and delivered. For me always counts. Enjoyed playing, kind of enjoyed the HTML visited-anchor highlighting to have a sneak look under the hood to avoid places I've been already in.
Neat. I think it's very easy for people to skim over the text in games like these and just go straight for the links. Maybe incrementally showing the paragraphs/sentences/words would help?
Ahh! I'm so happy to be playing a twine game, this is my first of the jam! Great job incorporating the theme in this. It's a clever game all around. Great work.
yay @starvingindie, appreciated thank you :thumbsup: twine is such a great tool, even in its default setup. I use it mostly for designing / scripting games, so it was a nice change to use it in a game setting again! For anyone interested my previous Twine game was False Positive, also playable on my itch page :smiley:
Awesome @adamk33n3r thank you. I hadn't actually set out to make it humorous, and it was only when I was playing it back that I realised it had naturally just developed it's own humor. :smile:
Great take on the concept and nice dialogue! I can't for the life of me figure out how to get to the ending, though. I thought maybe I'd done something wrong and tried restarting, but the game just resumes from the same place.
UPD: Never mind, I did find it in the end. It was well-hidden :) Nice little piece!
You start with nothing and end with nothing - haha this was a fun read, nice work. I came across this because my games link was nothing-2 someone beat me to my super original name haha
Seriously, entering #LDJAM again (after so long) has made my year! Thank you to everyone! Especially as I'd not planned on entering till I was hit by a random stroke of inspiration following a tweet recommending people to enter as part of a #30daydev challenge I'd set.
Good writing. I wanted to leave feedback but I guess everybody already mentioned sound. It could really play a big role in setting the mood and conveying the story. Small text animations and variations in background could help too.
Thank you @marcin-j :thumbsup:, really appreciate the feedback :smile: my primary aim was to ensure I completed the entry and didn't fall foul of the dangers of jam crunch, so I went 100% minimal for this reason, just so happens it worked out well and actually inadvertently fit the theme better. I might well revise it and add some subtle touches but if I did it would be mostly to enhance the story. :smile:
The game was pleasant. Of course it fit the theme, but what kept me responding was the hope that "something" would eventually happen. I did finally reach the end of the game. Good job! :)
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Actually made a similar thing for a school project.
Was the software called `twine 2`?
@ssstormy ah yes nice idea, going to have to research whether you can typewrite the passages now! :thumbsup:
- Disproving the Big Bang theory since 2019
UPD: Never mind, I did find it in the end. It was well-hidden :) Nice little piece!
Thank you @veer, really appreciate it!
Seriously, entering #LDJAM again (after so long) has made my year! Thank you to everyone! Especially as I'd not planned on entering till I was hit by a random stroke of inspiration following a tweet recommending people to enter as part of a #30daydev challenge I'd set.
Small text animations and variations in background could help too.
thank you also @nerdysl0th!
@yomissmar me too! Thank you, means alot! :smile: