Please Just Leave

Overall★★★★★★★★★★3.38
Fun★★★★★★★★★★3.05
Innovation★★★★★★★★★★3.43
Theme★★★★★★★★★★3.69
Graphics★★★★★★★★★★3.08
Audio★★★★★★★★★★3.43
Humor★★★★★★★★★★4.05
Mood★★★★★★★★★★3.42
The Narrator wants Boby to leave his place.
Boby, on the other hand...

Use WASD to move, and SPACE to interact.

This game needs to be played with volume turned on (in order to listen to the narrator)

I would have loved to make this game longer, but I didn't calculate well the times (this is my first game and first time participating in a gamejam). Also I'm aware it has some bugs, I'm planning to fix them and add more features to the game after the jam ends!

I hope you have a good time playing it :D.

if you want to see more animations of the game (some correction or newones that will be added when the jam ends), you can go to -> https://ldjam.com/users/noam-blei/feed

Comments75

NeithR
NeithR6 Oct 2020, 06:16
This is so funny hearing the narrator complaining xD
Tero Pulkkinen
Tero Pulkkinen6 Oct 2020, 06:17
door opens and i can control the player, but what should be happening next?
JuanSabadoPeron6 Oct 2020, 20:31
Pretty cool! I liked the script and the singing.

I think I found a few bugs:

-You can walk off screen to the left at the beginning before you're supposed to, and after the camera pans left you can walk off screen to the right.
-I entered the door on the far left before the narrator finished a sentence and two voice lines overlapped.
TwoBitMatt
TwoBitMatt6 Oct 2020, 23:45
This was a fun experience. A few little hitches and hiccups in the audio or animation, but nothing that really hurt the game for me. Thank you for the splash of humor!
Some45bucks6 Oct 2020, 23:51
This is neat idea fo the game. I think a lot of the jokes are pretty good. I wish you could do more things to interact with the narrator, but still its very intersting
Melon_spirit
Melon_spirit6 Oct 2020, 23:52
Oh my gosh if this game doesn't win the humor section I will be very disappointed in my fellow gamers! Also I agree with @juansabadoperon, I was able to walk off to the left at the beginning and I don't think I was supposed to.
killerkun
killerkun8 Oct 2020, 02:39
I loved the dialogue and animation of the character, this was such a nice experience :3
coderTrevor8 Oct 2020, 04:37
I've been Rickrolled!! :stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes:
I liked it! In my humble opinion, it's very important in game jams to throw out the ideas you can't implement on time and cobble together a complete experience out of what's left by the deadline. You did that perfectly, especially for your first jam. Good job!
Blue058 Oct 2020, 06:17
This game took a very different approach from other games and I liked that. The narrator is hilarious to listen to! From all of the games I've played in the jam, this deserves the top spot for humor. It's a great experience that's unique from the other games. Very well done for your first jam!
Artyom Volkov
Artyom Volkov8 Oct 2020, 18:30
Hilarious game, absolutely hilarious.
Ericbolseiro8 Oct 2020, 18:31
5 star in all!!!!! I loved your game!
DanielLeeMeeks
DanielLeeMeeks8 Oct 2020, 21:44
This game wins the simplicity to enjoyment ratio contest. Even though the "only" thing you do in it was walk through a door, I played to the end and would have gladly played a few more "rounds". I really liked when the door broke and then we got to see a new door, it drew me back in just as I was about to quit because thought I had seen the whole game.
eldogg
eldogg8 Oct 2020, 22:20
Really like how they open the door, it has a lot of character in the animation, definitely has the look of someone walking into somewhere and feeling awkward - great sound effect on it too.

Then when the narrator started talking and telling me what to do I knew I was in for a good time. A well realised concept, making a little go a long way, which is what good game design (and jam technique) is about! Thanks!
Runtra8 Oct 2020, 22:46
i got rickrolled twice in a day today thanks to this. Really funny the narrator
Noam Blei
Noam Bleiauthor8 Oct 2020, 23:52
@neithr Hahahaha yeah! I loved to make these scripts. I have like 3 more google doc pages of narration that couldn't get to fit yet (for time reasons), buuut I will come with more dialogue after the Jam ends :D
Noam Blei
Noam Bleiauthor8 Oct 2020, 23:56
@tero-pulkkinen you should keep entering into the doors! I know, it might sound boring... but give it a shot 😉, the narration and humor stuff makes it (at least in my and some users opinion as well) enjoyable :). Anyways, I'm alredy working in more interactuable things for the game
Noam Blei
Noam Bleiauthor8 Oct 2020, 23:57
@str8griz Nice! That was my principal objetive when the idea of this game came onto my mind: make people laugh hehe
Noam Blei
Noam Bleiauthor9 Oct 2020, 01:04
@twobitmatt You'r welcome! And thanks for your comment! About the animations, I will be uploading some updates on my feed (about corrections and things that I'm planning to add in the future as well). Here is the link :) https://ldjam.com/users/noam-blei/feed
Noam Blei
Noam Bleiauthor9 Oct 2020, 01:13
@some45bucks I'm glad you liked the jokes :). And yep! I'm working on a post-jam version with more interactuable stuff :D
naali
naali9 Oct 2020, 03:40
Very funny. Nice job. It was an engaging experience.
Noam Blei
Noam Bleiauthor9 Oct 2020, 04:51
@killerkun thanks!! It was really cool to watch you play my game as well :smile:
Noam Blei
Noam Bleiauthor9 Oct 2020, 04:52
@codertrevor Thank youu!! Pd: Never gonna give you up, never gonna let you dooown
Noam Blei
Noam Bleiauthor9 Oct 2020, 05:52
@danielleemeeks Thanks for your reply! I'm planning to add more stuff before the door breaks for a post-jam versión :). I'm glad you enjoyed
Asue
Asue9 Oct 2020, 07:19
I really liked this game, I find it different from other games and it's refreshing. I think there's potential to make more games like this and have even more interaction with the narrator. Well done!
tarfield
tarfield9 Oct 2020, 09:42
This game was fun, reminds me a bit of "The Beginners Guide". It's nice to see something different every once in a while. At one point, the narrator was talking over himself, maybe a bug? I had fun either way :)
thesedatedprince9 Oct 2020, 16:42
I laughed out loud at this. The idea reminded me a bit of The Stanley Parable. I think it could benefit from a few more things to interact with, but overall I had a great time playing it :)
Cedric869 Oct 2020, 17:16
Really liked this one.
There was bug though where if you tried to leave in rapid succession the voice tracks overlapped and the game finishes before the voice tracks are finished. But aside from that very cool idea and good implementation.
Keep it up!
Ismael Rodriguez
Ismael Rodriguez9 Oct 2020, 17:32
I left the game.... I think that what I was I supposed to right?
INoScop8dJFK9 Oct 2020, 17:37
I like the idea and it's fun to play with. Well done!
m-trigo
m-trigo9 Oct 2020, 19:13
I laughed aloud when the door broke. Great humor and I the door opening animation is very smooth.

Great job, *specially* for your first game! Hoping to always play your games in future jams!
MikoziQ
MikoziQ9 Oct 2020, 21:46
Perfect example of equation : humor^(fun) Would like to be more precise with audio based on movement. Other than that, good job and hilarious entry!
Noam Blei
Noam Bleiauthor9 Oct 2020, 23:15
@thesedatedprince @tarfield indeed it's inspired in that kind of game with that kind of narrator, such as Stanley Parable and The Begginers Guide. Yes, the overlaping audio is a bug, I will correct it on this days. Also I'm working on more interactuable stuff for a post-jam version!
Noam Blei
Noam Bleiauthor9 Oct 2020, 23:27
@cedric86 thankss!! Yep, I'm aware of that bug, I'm fixing it :)
Douglas Driving10 Oct 2020, 09:31
Hehe, I like the idea! Listening to the narrator is fun. However I think its a bit too much waiting on my part as a player - I am a little bit too impatient for it
ssjCoder_yt10 Oct 2020, 11:15
this game is very funny, just one thing, I think you should make the audio not so long cause I ended up getting bored at some points
Ruling Spear
Ruling Spear10 Oct 2020, 14:25
hahaha. Had a good laugh. Nice Rick roll in the credits.
kiryu10 Oct 2020, 15:38
Nice first game and fun monolog :smile:
Noam Blei
Noam Bleiauthor10 Oct 2020, 17:43
@m-trigo awww thankss!! And yess I'm really looking foward to to participate on the next LD jams :D
Noam Blei
Noam Bleiauthor10 Oct 2020, 17:44
@mikoziq Thanksss! and thanks for the critic as well, I'm planning to add more lines on a post-jam version :)
mcovert
mcovert10 Oct 2020, 20:59
I seem to be zoomed in really close to the character. I can walk off the right side but nothing seems to happen. Not sure what I should be doing here?
Noam Blei
Noam Bleiauthor10 Oct 2020, 21:01
@mcovert are you playing it with sound on? You have to listen to the narration in orden to understand the game :) (its the most important part heh)
Noam Blei
Noam Bleiauthor10 Oct 2020, 21:05
@douglas-driving @ssjcoder-yt thaks for your reply! And yep, I agree with you, I'm planning to re-record all the lines for a post-jam version, with more clean and fast talking :)
DrJexter10 Oct 2020, 21:45
I enjoyed this game :) I wasn't too sure the point of the timer in the corner though.
Nekopi
Nekopi10 Oct 2020, 21:56
It's really rare to see a game with a full on voice over narrator, really like your approach! I like the fact you've even added the hints in the game :). Although I'd change the door's SFX or may be add some more door SFXs since it's literally the only thing that you can interact with throughout the game
Tino
Tino10 Oct 2020, 22:34
>

Me: literally look on my left.. in my real room.
TheJonu
TheJonu11 Oct 2020, 20:14
Please put a reminder in the description that the game is only playable with sound on.
Doot
Doot11 Oct 2020, 20:14
Nice one!

This is a nice use of the game medium and the theme to tell an absurd story.
I found that the timer was a very good idea to even more question what you are still doing here as a player.

I can't say I had fun but this was a really cool idea, great job 💕
Toccio94
Toccio9411 Oct 2020, 20:14
The first thing I did was going to the credit and man those are maybe the more chaotic credits I've ever read lol. Seen after that this is a humor game, I'm not sure it was a mistake or intended lol
Also, the first camera being so close creeped me out, combined with the walk sound.

It's nice that you give a hint to avoid someone get stuck, but it may appear a bit after, I didn't even have the time to "explore". You could also just add something extra that makes me think to go to the left.

It was also fun that in the end I could still move behind the wall and hearing the footstep, it was like the red thing was already there and not gone, trolling him even more!

Fun game =) It lasted long enough for me, more would have probably been too much!
Noam Blei
Noam Bleiauthor11 Oct 2020, 20:16
@drjexter :smile: :smiley: , Yep indeed the timer doesn't have much of a point here. My original idea was to add a timer since I wanted to add more puzzles and stuff to interact so the players could compare how much it took to them to actually leave. It will have more sense in a post-jam version with more stuff to do :). Anyways I think it is a cool touch, so I decided to keep it anyways
Rule3412 Oct 2020, 05:33
Genuinely, this game made me laugh while playing it, it's a short but fun experience that fully achieves its goal of mixing humor with the loop's concept, I like it!
Noam Blei
Noam Bleiauthor18 Oct 2020, 13:51
@nekopi Yay! And thanks for the advise! I will definetly keep it in mind
hetttt427 Oct 2020, 10:33
I like this game, overall idea, the voice (the best part of it)!

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