The Fly's Eyes
Overall★★★★★★★★★★2.78
Fun★★★★★★★★★★2.84
Innovation★★★★★★★★★★3.31
Theme★★★★★★★★★★3.09
Graphics★★★★★★★★★★2.91
Audio★★★★★★★★★★1.46
Humor★★★★★★★★★★2.82
Mood★★★★★★★★★★2.54
This is my first game jam ever!! I'm sooo exited. I'm just a small kid, but I think I can do this!
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Since you are starting, I will limit suggestions to this: get Sfxr (or Bfxr, or ZzFX). Those are simple sound effects maker, free softwares. You can make sound effect for your game in few minutes with those.
And one more thing about your Ludum Dare game page. Always add description what your game is about, what tools you used and controls. Even if this will be something as simple as: Action - Mouse or Tools Used: Unity. It's adding a lot to the presentation of your page.
Anyway. Good job with your first game!
You got the fly to move towards the zapper, and the fly swatter to collide with the fly properly, although it doesn't make much sense why you would use a fly swatter if you're trying to protect your pet fly.
Maybe change the swatter to a hand, or something weird like a Q-tip to make it more interesting. You could also try to create some mechanic where you can swat near the fly and it will fly away temporarily so that you don't have to drag it away on your own. And a score counter to count how long you managed to keep the fly alive.
Again, great job on submitting in time and keep practicing game development! in a few years you'll be releasing some awesome games