Ludum Dare #56compo

Spider Business

by vindicta

Overall★★★★★★★★★★3.69

Fun★★★★★★★★★★3.32

Innovation★★★★★★★★★★3.31

Theme★★★★★★★★★★4.00

Graphics★★★★★★★★★★3.47

Audio★★★★★★★★★★3.59

Humor★★★★★★★★★★3.89

Mood★★★★★★★★★★3.50

The game is a visual novel about a spider who dreams of starting his own business. Players will follow his adventures, face challenges, make decisions, and interact with various characters to help the spider succeed in his venture.

Tags: #2d, #funny, #ren'py, #short, #singleplayer, #sprites, #storygame

Genres: adventure, visual novel

Tools: Ren'Py

Comments11

ladybenko7 Oct 2024, 18:19

hi! a visual novel with spiders, I didn't see that one coming :) I got to the part of the minigame of catching flies, but after losing it I got an IndexedDB error

dooskington7 Oct 2024, 19:33

That fly catching minigame is tough! A bit more feedback for each fly caught would help a lot in making that part more fun :)

RichardGots1238 Oct 2024, 09:38

nice idea and good realisation

Laura_178 Oct 2024, 11:02

interesting idea

voidraizer9 Oct 2024, 02:42

Neat idea and implementation, but I will say the sound can be a bit piercing, especially with headphones on

candlesan10 Oct 2024, 02:10

A visual novel indeed. I like the manner in which the spider talkd about web fees, it made me feel like the agony of actually starting a business and all the fees and rules you have to go through not to mention it's a pun with "world wide web" fees

JohnCoffee11 Oct 2024, 00:25

a bit lengthy, a bit buggy, but it is a visual novel. good job :)

Sabrina_Ross11 Oct 2024, 00:31

Ren'py flashbang me when opening it, love visual novels and the puns the dialogue were really silly and cute. The bug catching game was kinda bugged and scuffed though.

zoglu12 Oct 2024, 13:26

Nice idea to make a visual novel with this theme ! The beggining was great, however I also ran into the bug described by @ladybenko

SdCorpse14 Oct 2024, 00:37

It is a very interesting idea to create the visual novel not in anime style!)

Brain Siege Gameworks16 Oct 2024, 12:35

It's is charming but the error with the flycatching minigame really hurts it.