Untroubled Bliss
An interactive fiction, or a short story about recognising the certain signals.
Made in Twine.
You wake up and this day is just perfect. You should probably get outside and enjoy spring in the park. Or maybe you have some other plans? No matter what, you'll probably have to deal with this annoying beeping first...
Made in Twine.
You wake up and this day is just perfect. You should probably get outside and enjoy spring in the park. Or maybe you have some other plans? No matter what, you'll probably have to deal with this annoying beeping first...
Tags: #ludum-dare-59, #multiple endings, #narrative, #no ai, #sci-fi, #story rich, #text based, #twine
Genres: adventure
Tools: Twine

Comments44
Overall some decent writing in there, manages to build a world with only a few sentences. I think it needs a little bit of imagery, if you had simple a drawing of the room and you would click on each element to interact with it instead of choosing a text option it would elevate the game. Adding some ambient music would also have been a low-hanging fruit to set the vibes.
@kkkyia totally agree! thank you
i thought about adding some imagery but decided to limit it as much as possible (there is one art piece you get with the "true" ending only), as my challenge for this LD was to create a text game. clicking on the elements is probably another genre :) but ambient music is a great idea!
@lollister thank you for playing! i'll definitely look into adding some music or sound effects :)