Nice story, nice music, nice atmo. A bit too much of reading, for my taste. Maybe you could use a serif-font that looks more "timesy" to make it more interesting. Helvetica looks too modern for this type of story. Also it would make it more fun (at least for me) if there's some hint telling me HOW my decision influences the story.
@yodamaster thanks! yeah better feedback to the player of what exactly they influenced is something that was not reached due to time constraints. The reading bits could be interspersed with some player choices maybe.
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