Controlled State

Overall★★★★★★★★★★3.37
Fun★★★★★★★★★★2.97
Innovation★★★★★★★★★★3.25
Theme★★★★★★★★★★3.44
Graphics★★★★★★★★★★3.00
Audio★★★★★★★★★★3.04
Humor★★★★★★★★★★2.27
Mood★★★★★★★★★★3.91
Coolness★★★★★★★★★★100%
I'm excited to say that I've finished my third Ludum Dare.

For my game I depicted a dystopian society where the citizens are very sheltered and are restricted to what they can and cannot do. In the game you live the life of a citizen in this controlled state.

Sick of food shortages, lack of freedom, and a dead-end factory job, you plan your escape. There are multiple endings based on your actions in the game. Let me know if you can find them all.

I'm glad that I decided to go for a 3D game this time around. It took a lot of time to make the scenes but I think the 3D environment makes it more immersive for my game idea.

Anyways let me know what you think.

Genres: adventure

Comments47

ataxkt30 Apr 2013, 00:57
Ahoy! Very artsy. I can tell this was really well thought out (I'm cynical and didn't expect it to be, sorry!), its a shame the graphics don't match that level. You certainly did well with Unity perfabs though! 4 stars!
VictorGrunn30 Apr 2013, 00:58
I admit, the first thing that surprised me about the controlled state was having what looks like a nice LCD TV. Interesting little game.
nintendoeats30 Apr 2013, 01:04
Very impressive! I have a had an Orwell fixation for literally half of my life, I feel like you captured that atmosphere very well. Admittedly you did leave SOME hope, so it is perhaps a bit less morbid than the game that I would make with this theme.

When I picked up the gun I quickly looked behind me to make sure that nobody saw. If it were me I would have given the gun a sound, but I respect that as an artistic choice.
allinlabs
allinlabs30 Apr 2013, 01:10
I've been questionned, tortured and killed... Pretty deep game... I first thought it'll be a "every day is exactly the same" type of game, but that's just a part of your dystopian society. Quiet brutal ending for me :)
Pretty neat game, very moody. Let's try the other endings !
allinlabs
allinlabs30 Apr 2013, 01:15
@ataxkt I actually liked the graphics. Everything's gray, except the propanganda. Felt very depressed while playing as a citizen of this morose country. So, that's a perfect match for me.
Farjuan30 Apr 2013, 01:41
Wow, this game is amazing, it speaks so much, this is great work you should be proud of yourself!
cadin
cadin30 Apr 2013, 01:45
I can't figure this out. How do I get out of the room?
neight30 Apr 2013, 01:45
Really liked the communism. Would like to see more capitalism in a future version. Great job!
Sgt Squirrelly30 Apr 2013, 01:45
I really loved the art choices as well. This was a super engaging experience! At one point (When I was riding my bike), the loop stopped for a second or two, and I started freaking out looking around. Really great job creating such an expressive, engaging experience in such a short time.
anjack30 Apr 2013, 01:47
The graphics style and background music really set the mood. Good game! I like existential trips like this.
ronsho
ronsho30 Apr 2013, 01:52
Neat, I had an easy job. Was there an ending?
Stryphe30 Apr 2013, 01:57
Nice game! I found 2 of the endings, Escape and tackled/killed.
jackspinoza
jackspinoza30 Apr 2013, 02:04
quite interesting, I liked how bleak it was. Not sure if I should've found it so funny. great work.
Korda30 Apr 2013, 04:13
This was pretty good
Fabien Porée30 Apr 2013, 13:12
"This is the life in a Controlled state"; this game is sounding pretty propagandy :)
I like the way the blocks turn to look at you, it's kind of funny!
I wish you were even less afraid to bore the player.
Tiago1 May 2013, 07:08
Awesome game, I will play it more to try and get all the endings, in my first one my town just got nuked =(
good job with the art and sound!
GameNachoauthor2 May 2013, 02:31
@ataxkt Well I'm glad my game was better than you expected it to be, thanks for the feedback!
@nintendoeats Thanks I really tried to set the tone in this one
@allinlabs Haha thanks, yeah the endings might seem a little dark, but that's part of the experience ;)
@Farjuan Thank you, I am!
@Sgt Squirrelly Hmm that's odd I've never encountered that bug but good thing it didn't seem to cause that much harm, but anyways thank you very much!
@anjack Thanks!
@Stryphe You're getting there, there's still more to discover ;)
@Tiago Thanks I appreciate it!

Thanks for all the feedback everyone, I really appreciate it!
Nonameghost2 May 2013, 04:30
Hey awesome! I had a similar idea in my game but you totally took it to an awesome place. I liked the idea of dropping the gun in front of the player to see if they would take it! Nice work!
cwilloughby2 May 2013, 04:39
Whoa. Very cool. Loved the atmosphere. Liked the graphics, audio, and mood. Very sobering. Fits the theme very well! Excellent work.
Alexander
Alexander2 May 2013, 04:39
This gave me goosegumps, great music and use of the theme. Absolutely loved the suddenness of the ending for me.
kirby_freak2 May 2013, 04:47
Interesting game! You did a good job of capturing the mood, although the music was a bit too... upbeat to match the visual mood, in my opinion. At least you had music though, so props! :P I picked up the gun, went on a shooting spree, and got captured and killed pretty fast, so it seems as though I missed a better ending, which made it a bit boring, but I like that you actually have multiple endings. Overall a cool little piece. :)
SomeNetworkGuy2 May 2013, 06:40
Excellent idea. I'd love to see a longer game like this.

I could not figure out how to escape. I can kill all the guards, but the next day they are back and after me. Any hints?
GaTechGrad3 May 2013, 03:13
This game reminds me of how lucky I am to live in a free society.
GameNachoauthor3 May 2013, 17:46
@Nonameghost Thanks I really appreciate it!
@Alexander Thank you, I tried to make the ending abrupt I think if fit well!
@cwilloughby Thank you!
@kirby_freak There is a better ending than that but the one you got is not the "worst" ending, anyways thanks for the feedback!
@SomeNetworkGuy You're close, once you kill a guard they will be after you the whole game, be careful what you do!
@GaTechGrad Good that's kind of what I was going for ;), and thanks for the shoutout on twitter!
Dohan
Dohan3 May 2013, 18:18
Wow, impresive! I've got out of the country on my second playthrough.

Having a jumping key that made me not stop pushing it and the fact that people look at you when you are near them remembers me (in a very minimalistic way) to Morrowind.
yellowlemming3 May 2013, 18:26
I rather like the feel of it, the grey colours help to give it a depressing feel although I can't help thinking that they were probably the default colours as well, also, the guards were hard to distinguish as guards to begin with, I assumed they were some sort of security camera
ashdnazg4 May 2013, 15:46
A neat and special game!
Good job :)
MinionStudios
MinionStudios6 May 2013, 00:25
Wow, so simple and so effective! Are there multiple endings? I am going to find out!
Daisuke9096 May 2013, 00:35
I could only find the one where I get tortured and killed. I think I'm doing it wrong.
SmilingCat6 May 2013, 00:50
Pretty cool, I managed to get 3 different endings.

Good job on the environment models!
JonathanG6 May 2013, 09:02
Excellent job. Nice audio, stuck to the theme well, rather haunting in tone and mood. Makes you think. Liked the choice aspect.
Jorjon
Jorjon6 May 2013, 10:46
Well done man. I like games that give a message. And this is beatifully done.
lightnarcissus
lightnarcissus7 May 2013, 18:25
Good to see a game revolving around a different concept. Got some heavy 1984 vibes from this. Kudos to you for making such a game for LD.
lotusgame8 May 2013, 13:50
I am an Orwell's fan so i appreciate this game very much :) The mood is excellent and the game well executed. I wish i had more meaningful play to have a better control on endings (i saw two differents endings). How many endings is there ?
Rafael Sales8 May 2013, 21:19
Great game. It's really immersive, like you said. Congrats!
ovenchips
ovenchips8 May 2013, 23:26
It's impressive you can create such a tense atmosphere with simple geometric primitives. Really polished and well thought out.
pereubu9 May 2013, 17:08
l-l-like it :D
TheSarcastic10 May 2013, 00:43
Wow, really awesome man :) Great music!
Jellycakes11 May 2013, 03:39
I'm a sucker for atmospheric games and this was no different. I really loved the ambience and mood the game set. I developed an attachment to a cube that got shot, but then I suddenly thought evil things when I saw the gun I could pick up. I got tackled in the end but still a pretty good experience, nice job!
Tiago Ling Alexandre11 May 2013, 15:31
Very nice game! Cool music, totally combines with the mood!
My first playthrough i got tortured then killed, i'm gonna try again to see if i can reach a happier ending!

Congratulations!
PsenFilip11 May 2013, 15:43
Think about there are several people living by these rules right at this moment. This non sensical way of living and control is still alive.

The mood is awesome. This a very good experience everyone should try. This game is really good. Should be part of a broader discussion.

So onto the game:
I couldn't stand living that way. I tried "La Revolucion" by hands and a gun but I failed half-way.
GameNachoauthor11 May 2013, 19:08
@lightnarcissus Thanks, I appreciate it!
@lotusgame Thank you!
@Rafael Sales Haha thanks!
@ovenchips Thanks! It was thought out ;)
@TheSarcastic Thanks :)
@Jellycakes I'm glad you enjoyed it!
@Tiago Ling Alexandre Great, Thank you!
@PsenFilip Yes it's sad that there are people still forced to live a restricted life. And good recap of what you did in the game.

Again thanks for the feedback everyone!
alwaysinbeta13 May 2013, 21:53
Really enjoyed it. Was wondering if there was an ending for a while, then... the gun. Good atmosphere.

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