Scratch

Not your best game of course but I enjoyed it and it surprised me. twice. in a 2 seconds intervals. cool.

Did not see that coming in the end xD, great game nonetheless

Oh my god. THE SURPRISE.

Nice take on the theme. Not sure what that thing was though, maybe aliens.

I got so engaged in that, and then--abrupt lovely confusion. That was quite enjoyable.

Lol! I love how the friend is just like, "Oh, why diddnt you tell me sooner? ok bye." Nice suprise though :)

Kafka would be proud!

Hehe nice! That was sure unexpected! Nicely done.

Nice twist at the end.

I like the graphics! :)

It pulls you in to give you an interesting surprise at the end. The best part of this game was the graphics. I always like games with multiple endings, so that was a plus.

There needs to be a category for storytelling or something :). Even played twice to see different dialog and endings.

Boy, that escalated quickly !

YEEEEEEEHHH! I'm an evil creature! I enjoyed it, like, every part of it. Except for the sound, because it doesn't has any.

That ending is up there with The Usual Suspects and Virtue's Last Reward.

Also: Boom, voice acting: https://soundcloud.com/xgeovanni/scratch
(Feel free to contact me with job offers. I won't get out of bed for less that $80 000).

pretty cool, although I should note that white text on a yellow background is often not a superb choice.

That made me WTF pretty hard in the end. I really enjoy the graphics, really pleasant on the eyes.

Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

That ending D:
Brilliant work on the extreme teen angst part.. I feel so disgusted with the way the character is disgusted with herself that it actually made it make more sense if you know what I mean.

First manga styled game in this LD I've spotted so far.
Nice little game!

This end xD nice one.

I liked the surprise at the end. A tale of alienation becomes more literal! ;) Nice capturing of teen angst in the dialog. I was just clicking right along reading up the story, totally sucked into it.

That was so deep and then all of the sudden just what. Played through again, sad I got the same path even though I changed my responses. Still a great game!

Wasn't expecting to see another VN in Ludum Dare. Really liked the twist and twist's design.

I just LOVED the graphic style. Wish I could draw like this (I am awful with human-shaped things).
It is a shame that there is only one ending, because I would have gladly played through it multiple time to find them all (which I already did, and always got the same ending).
Great job anyway, loved it!

The simplistic graphics style worked wonders, but for me the story wasn't all that compelling. Too bad I also spoiled myself a bit on the other comments :(.

Anssi@MooseflyGames

Nice game. Now, only if there is multiple endings :P

I know some people exactly like that.

I... really liked this. I thought the main character was just transgendered and severely depressed at first, and then... that twist *_* I actually don't have much of anything to add as far as concrit--the game looks great, with good color design and well-chosen images. It may be tiny, but I think it was just the right size for the scope, the twist, and the ideas at hand. A nice game, and I appreciated that you put in multiple endings for such a small project.

Now I want to go take a look at your work for the other competitions! Thank you. This was a nice breather in-between everything else.

Cool game, I really enjoyed it. I was missing some sound/music, but still... ;) I made a game by the same name, but yours is better, of course!

I loved it. The ending caught me off guard :P

Hey bentosmile! I immediately recognized your style on the tiny thumbnail screenshot. I have played your visual novels on my Ouya. Air Pressure was - "fun" is not the right word - really engaging.

Great ending