Interesting! I'm a big fan of non-game games, so I found this to be pretty cool. Some branching of the narrative or _some_ level of interaction would be cool. Good job!
In this kind of game / art, one really has to nail the narrative, which you did extremely well! The music was great, the characters very nice as well. Too bad you didn't go through with the entire story, it feels unfinished. Wonderful job though!
At this point--just a cutscene, but by gosh, the play you chose to represent was a great one, and the background music so well-chosen! Thank you for introducing me to them! Loved how you handled the perspective and lighting, and the actors' physicality. Thank you for the experience!
visual novels aren't really my cup of tea, so I can't really give any strong praise or criticism to this game without being misinformed. That said, I can point out that it was a bit irritating that the arrow to advance to the next text box shifted location with every line of dialogue, which made it a little frustrating to advance the narrative.
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Drawings are pretty decent, it really has its own style.
Good job, although it's not really a game ;)
Wish the next dialogue button was in the same place every time, though.