So this is my entry for this Ludum Dare. My goal this weekend was to follow a tutorial to create a spline editor in Unity3D. But finally, tonight after the work I decide to make something that looks like a game. Mostly to be able to vote and comments other games :)
I'm note sure it's a game. But at least it's zen and relaxing.
Thanks you for playing.
(PS : Once I'll reinstall completely unity3d 5.3, I will made the WebGL build.)
I liked the aesthetics you used in the game, particularly the Skybox use and the music. I liked the rail controls, although I'm not the best at them, but found the poetry writing impossible to read while playing. To me, not zen and relaxing at all! Fun, nonetheless!
I was able to kinda read it because I remember some narrator reading it, so it sounded in my head :) With more challenge added it's going to be a great game. For now, the coolest thing is seeing this 3D path all over the space. The idea of collecting words for the poem, or maybe "pieces of thought" or inspiration, this brings 5 stars for innovation from me.
Awesome concept! Loved that instead of score you collected words of a poem, great idea! Visuals were really nice and the music was lovely, great stuff :)
While poem and game did no seem to connect, I liked both. Music was interestingly fitting both the visual stlye and the poem. Good job!
Reading while playing was difficult, maybe stretching out the collectibles or having a narrator read a piece the poem everytime a verse/sentence/unit is complete would get rid of that.
I would have liked to hear a recording of the poetry, since reading it was a bit hard.
Good job!
Cheers,
Morco (tyrants.not.found team)