UNTIL I RUN OUT OF SPACE
Tools: Unity
Comments12
Carlos Giraldo18 Aug 2018, 06:28
Hey good job! I enjoyed reading the story and exploring the crazy planets described. You have good writing abilities and would love to see this fleshed out more with potentially more choices per planet and accompanying art. I would have preferred if the planets description didn't match your objectives so explicitly, so that it feels better when you check something of the list without being so expected. Nice mood too. Keep it up!
Demn22 Aug 2018, 19:54
Hi there !
Enjoyed reading your little story.
Graphisms are minimalist but the little icons u made for each memory of a planet are pretty great.
Music is really peaceful, It felt chill to travel planets by planets without any fight but just for filling my dreams.
About the text now : I feel like you could have implanted choices in some planets, also a less explicit description of the planet. Maybe some planets could hold two elements given our choices ? This would add more replayability and would be more fun to play. The tone of the text is really peaceful, I loved the mood you gave to the game, this lone guitar playing some random chords behind really put me back in highschool or smthing haha.
Really liked the concept of the game and the mood you gave. Good job !
Enjoyed reading your little story.
Graphisms are minimalist but the little icons u made for each memory of a planet are pretty great.
Music is really peaceful, It felt chill to travel planets by planets without any fight but just for filling my dreams.
About the text now : I feel like you could have implanted choices in some planets, also a less explicit description of the planet. Maybe some planets could hold two elements given our choices ? This would add more replayability and would be more fun to play. The tone of the text is really peaceful, I loved the mood you gave to the game, this lone guitar playing some random chords behind really put me back in highschool or smthing haha.
Really liked the concept of the game and the mood you gave. Good job !
Hilvon25 Aug 2018, 08:40
This was wonderful.
Seeing the aging indicator not only during transit could help as I basically didn't realise what was going on, and so retired 1 jump before collecting my last wish...
But still this is a really beautiful game. Not necessarily in graphical sense, but definitely in emotional.
Seeing the aging indicator not only during transit could help as I basically didn't realise what was going on, and so retired 1 jump before collecting my last wish...
But still this is a really beautiful game. Not necessarily in graphical sense, but definitely in emotional.
pengda25 Aug 2018, 09:43
VERY Nice music！
Good mood and story that connect the gameplay very well.--"Sometimes you can't go back "
I like this game！
Good mood and story that connect the gameplay very well.--"Sometimes you can't go back "
I like this game！
danielblanco3d25 Aug 2018, 19:35
Congrats! Music and story are great...One of the best narrative games i have found this ludumdare.
It fits the theme in so many clever ways...I could not fill the whole inventory but i did the four targets that i chose, anyway it seems i did not run out of space...
Some generated titles in the travel map were very little and hard to read...or maybe I need glasses...
It fits the theme in so many clever ways...I could not fill the whole inventory but i did the four targets that i chose, anyway it seems i did not run out of space...
Some generated titles in the travel map were very little and hard to read...or maybe I need glasses...
NullCode25 Aug 2018, 20:11
This is the first time I've rated a game highly for mood. Good job!
Liven25 Aug 2018, 21:08
Very nice ambiance
Trevor Hayes25 Aug 2018, 21:24
The game saves your progress and is not replayable! It feel like that was a deliberate creative choice and not a bug though. I played again in a different browser to experience the planets I missed. 5 stars for mood on this one. Nicely done.
goudagames25 Aug 2018, 22:59
Very nice relaxing little story game, the atmosphere is great and I loved the story you create as you play. Good job.
Rahim_Pxr27 Aug 2018, 17:06
Nice game, Love how everything is balanced!
Good luck, Don't forget to take a look at ours if you don't mind and see what it's like when we just focused on graphics in this game jam!
Game Link: https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/42/spacelab-42a
Good luck, Don't forget to take a look at ours if you don't mind and see what it's like when we just focused on graphics in this game jam!
Game Link: https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/42/spacelab-42a
jordantanner29 Aug 2018, 09:53
This game is beautiful. The ambient and honest acoustic guitar performance helps support the thoughtful narrative as you go through life trying to make your dreams come true.
Good Luck🍀