The Dying Fish

by lexyvil
Overall★★★★★★★★★★3.37
Fun★★★★★★★★★★3.32
Innovation★★★★★★★★★★3.35
Theme★★★★★★★★★★4.13
Graphics★★★★★★★★★★3.77
Audio★★★★★★★★★★3.69
Humor★★★★★★★★★★3.22
Mood★★★★★★★★★★3.30
A simple game where you must keep your fish alive.

This may not be my proudest project in terms of quality, but still glad to have worked with my girlfriend on this one.

Comments17

Papabirb
Papabirb20 Apr 2020, 18:30
I like it! I managed 89 seconds on my first try. The game kinda registers that I'm clicking around on this page to review it though, so the game keeps restarting whenever I click in my browser. Your fish can last 26 seconds with no player input, which is a lot longer than my game! I went for a seconds-based score system too. Our games are pretty similar, yet feel completely different! I love the magic of game design.

The pixel art is awesome, that potted tree looks fantastic and the fish is so cute! I like the color coordinated meters too, it makes things very clear even without labels. I do wish there was a meter to show the contamination of the bowl though, a good threshold for learning how much is too much. Or a way to clean the bowl somehow, maybe one that poses its own problems? Cleaner fluid that clears the dirt but is toxic to the fish in high amounts or something.

Audio would have been a plus: either you included it and it's not working for me, or you didn't include it and could have opted out of that rating. As is, I gave Audio and Humor each 1 star since otherwise all the ratings only count as 0.75 of a rating instead of 1 whole rating, which seems unfair to me.

Overall, I think it has a lot of potential with just a little bit of extra polish! I'm glad you and your girlfriend were able to make something together!
Lexyvil
Lexyvilauthor20 Apr 2020, 23:51
@papabirb Thanks for trying! I managed to fix that issue where the game still takes inputs while out of the window. The toxicity of the tank is already shown in the corner as the green bar, and hopefully I can add the rest like sound effect and music on time.
Almighty Games
Almighty Games21 Apr 2020, 03:41
I thought the pixel art graphics were nice. I wasn't that engaged with the game play. Congrats on successfully making a game 'with your girlfriend' :)
jk5000
jk500023 Apr 2020, 18:10
Super simple and fun little game. The graphic is very cute and friendly. Overall a good jam game.
marcusnystrand24 Apr 2020, 07:31
I think you should be proud regardless, because you worked on something fun together.

Besides, I think the result is pretty good given the short time frame
ryan123rudder
ryan123rudder24 Apr 2020, 07:41
Ha we both made fish games! Fun game, and nice arstyle
nosfer
nosfer27 Apr 2020, 11:39
56 seconds :) - nice art. Fish could've swim faster for the food and I don't quite know how to clean the tank bottom
colozz
colozz27 Apr 2020, 12:11
A simple but effective game, I loved the pixel art and the music.

The game is challenging, I always got killed due to contamination.

Well done :)
akitl
akitl29 Apr 2020, 11:05
good, but what's the sponge for?
xitaro29 Apr 2020, 18:36
hahha very fun game! loved the mechanic and the way that you handle stuff
DataGreed
DataGreed29 Apr 2020, 20:14
nice variation on a tamagochi :)
Lexyvil
Lexyvilauthor30 Apr 2020, 02:26
@akitl Thanks for trying! And the sponge is to help lower the contamination level when left underwater.
Boaz8 May 2020, 06:46
Good game

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