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Overall★★★★★★★★★★3.79
Fun★★★★★★★★★★3.83
Innovation★★★★★★★★★★3.77
Theme★★★★★★★★★★4.30
Graphics★★★★★★★★★★2.88
Audio★★★★★★★★★★3.46
Mood★★★★★★★★★★4.18
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Comments22

TheBookSnail
TheBookSnail5 Oct 2020, 22:45
Fun to follow the story. Theme on point. Good sounds/color for each voice.
UkuleleFury
UkuleleFury6 Oct 2020, 00:07
Cool! For repeating so much, it didn't really feel too repetitive. It was fun to see what was next.
madbookstudios
madbookstudios7 Oct 2020, 00:50
Awesome, I was fully gripped by the story. Insanely good game, and brilliant writing. The text/terminal style suited it really well and the backing sounds really set the mood. Nice job!
GetSky
GetSky8 Oct 2020, 15:58
Amazing job! Didn't feel repetitive at all, liked the story a lot! Writing is just brilliant! Even the sound design is on point. You made a really fun text game!
Endurion
Endurion8 Oct 2020, 16:09
Wow, great writing! A few typos here and there, but quite well handled.
ugly_robot
ugly_robot8 Oct 2020, 16:29
Fantastic, excellent execution.
The sound does a great job of selling the subtle emotionality.
Wonderful story, lets the player fill in many of the gaps themselves, while still selling a complete plot.
Great job!
OwlyCode
OwlyCodeauthor8 Oct 2020, 17:28
Thank you everyone for the feedback so far! It means a lot to me!

@endurion can you post here the typos you encountered if you remember them? I'm non native english speaker and this will help me to improve my english.
Endurion
Endurion8 Oct 2020, 18:44
I'm not native english as well :)

It's really not many:
Prisonner (only one n)
7.8 billions of intelligent beings (move s from intelligents to being)
And then we splitted (should be split I think)

The - between silicum and based seems to be outside the used font, it's tiny.

That's all I could find ;)
Stracker
Stracker8 Oct 2020, 21:12
Great atmosphere ! The sound and visual design match perfectly, and the length was on point, great entry !
Basileios
Basileios10 Oct 2020, 19:29
This was brilliant! The best and most unique attempt at the idea
M8rix
M8rix10 Oct 2020, 19:32
Excellent and gripping story!! Intuitive gameplay and I like it :)
MZA
MZA10 Oct 2020, 19:39
This is lovely. Kept me guessing throughout.
Neowedge
Neowedge10 Oct 2020, 20:02
Great narrative, nice entry!
BumDag
BumDag11 Oct 2020, 10:01
I loved how you did that with a powerful game engine. Very emersive, thank you.
Onkel Mo12 Oct 2020, 14:38
A very nice take on the theme. Good way to tell a story without really telling much.
Yword
Yword15 Oct 2020, 15:11
I just finished it! Unexpected idea, with great narrative and intriguing story. ^_^
exilegl
exilegl17 Oct 2020, 01:41
Really fun story, surprisingly immersive. :) Really unique use of the theme too.
ice918 Oct 2020, 01:15
Great writing and an excellent idea for the theme of the jam!

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