PORTAL TO THE RIGHT WORLD

Overall★★★★★★★★★★3.31
Fun★★★★★★★★★★2.85
Innovation★★★★★★★★★★2.96
Graphics★★★★★★★★★★4.11
Audio★★★★★★★★★★3.02
HTML5 VERSION https://lollytweek.itch.io/gamejam-game

A small game about warrior, who teleports near the worlds.
This is my first game :)

*A human at start can't be killed)*

Genres: platformer

Comments21

dzolkin3 Oct 2022, 18:16
I liked it
mudlee
mudlee3 Oct 2022, 18:27
I could not manage to complete the third level. Even my daugther tried to push me but after like 30 try I gave up. I felt that the sword's collision detection is not what I expect. It hits far away and when the dino is too close, I just die. And if it's not enough punishment, you continously die by just standing at the very beginning. A kind of motivation to play at least... :)
MelbaDream4 Oct 2022, 11:27
Pro:
- Really nice art
- Quick, fast and fun

Cons :
- Restarting to the first level is a bit too punishing, especially with this level of difficulty
- The ennemy hitbox is very punishing and the sword hitbox doesn't match the sword at all, which made it confusing
- It took me some time to understand the "shop" (I thought I had to interact with it at first)
Fedir4 Oct 2022, 13:59
Great graphic, but attack work not every time, and hard to go long distance, and hows the shop work?)
kostya4 Oct 2022, 14:11
Nice style!
d3w
d3w4 Oct 2022, 20:27
Great Art!
Very hard to play. Probably It is something wrong with me/
Oleksandra
Oleksandra5 Oct 2022, 18:47
Really beautiful art!
I passed the game, but the control is uncomfortable because the radius of attack is not obvious.
Faust_Mi
Faust_Mi6 Oct 2022, 18:44
Really nice art! Quick, fast and againe =)
borgi
borgi6 Oct 2022, 21:59
Very cool conecept, really fits the theme. I really like the feel of this game. Sounds and graphics are really coherent and fun. I also found it a bit on the hard side, which could be good, but would be nice to restart the actual level instead of going back to lvl0 :-D Also, I think the swords hitbox/damage hitbox comes too late, according to the animation I expect it to already kill the enemies when it still does not. Also would be nice to hit faster :D But that could be just my personal preference! I do think this could be further developed nicely! Anways, very nice game for this jam, good work!
min4uk
min4uk7 Oct 2022, 12:10
nice game, great art!
Starlight Glimmer is best poney8 Oct 2022, 02:02
The theme is more "Stuck in a loop" than "Every 10 seconds". Nice game but needs better collision
Tatha9 Oct 2022, 00:48
Loved the art and animation! Audio/SFX could have been better - more complex and just more- but they were ok. I got stuck on lvl 3 and gave u after about 10 goes. I kept playing for ten because I wanted to get good enough to beat it! hahah. I actually really like the game and I think if it wasn't so difficult, I'd really have loved it
MrBamboo
MrBamboo9 Oct 2022, 12:38
The 2dart is very nice. I loved the rogue like style that force us to improve run after run. The only thing I had difficulties is the slash attack. The mouse seam unresponsive sometimes and the hitbox could have been cheated a bit to cover a greater area
congusbongus
congusbongus9 Oct 2022, 16:14
This game ended too soon! The art is beautiful, I wonder if too much time was spent on it than the rest of the game lol! Good effort for a first game
Wichit9 Oct 2022, 16:16
Cute art style! & interesting concept! The attack felt a bit off timing wise, otherwise great work!
woahitsjeff10 Oct 2022, 02:49
Nice art, good sound! The core of the game is interesting, but a bit frustrating to always get kicked back to the start when you die, esp. since it felt like sometimes the attacks didn't properly register (or I collided with enemies much sooner than it looked like?). Solid entry, but I do think it would benefit from being a bit more forgiving.
Vodzik
Vodzik10 Oct 2022, 21:40
Attack control is not responsive, but you have nice graphic and animations there. Nice job for your first game :)
bbaf
bbaf11 Oct 2022, 22:01
Great art and visuals, game is easy to pickup without any extra tutorials.
Could be a bit punishing. But, in case you want to keep instant death I would recommend to polish combat mechanics a bit:
- add some death sfx/vfx to enemies

- speed up initial attack animation (fadeout animation/cooldown could be the same, but players would want an instant response to any input) YOKO TARO and Takahisa Taura wouldn't lie :smile:


- tweak the enemy's trigger boxes. You might have several of them. Smaller to killing a player, and larger for income attacks from a player.

It is also not quite clear why we need these crystals, but I guess you have some plans for them later.

Overall, the game looks awesome so far. A quick intro makes it easier to restart and try again with extra motivation. Good luck with the jam!

PS. Only on my 10th playthrough, I noticed a different attack animation when you click while running :)
PS2. I've beaten it
FreeRunner14 Oct 2022, 09:27
Great game :) very amazing graphics, beautiful pixelate. Runs visually smooth as a baby on Safari browser. Good idea implementing the counter. I like the dinosaurs, they're cute :D I didn't get any audio on the first playthrough on safari, might try another browser and see if that is better :)
AdrianGray
AdrianGray16 Oct 2022, 18:59
Nice idea, the hitbox is a bit offseted, as enemies can hit you from far away, also your hit registers too late.

Liked the graphics, movement is pretty nice and sound is good!

Great entry!

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