Magpie's Kleptomania

by elmalach

Overall★★★★★★★★★★2.69

Fun★★★★★★★★★★2.12

Innovation★★★★★★★★★★2.56

Theme★★★★★★★★★★3.06

Humor★★★★★★★★★★3.00

Mood★★★★★★★★★★3.00

Visual novel in the adventure genre You play as Magpie, a single mother who wants to decorate her nest with all kinds of shiny things to make it the most beautiful nest in the whole forest. Join the battle and make thoughtful decisions so that your chicks grow up in wealth. (WARNING: This game is a for fun, made on Twine, and it consists of pictures taken from the internet.) If you faced any bugs please contact us

Genres: visual novel

Tools: Twine

Comments9

zexurge7 Oct 2025, 02:39

lmao has hatoful boyfriend vibes :bath:

rosday7 Oct 2025, 02:57

Cute! The dodging minigame is clever

TomPendergrass7 Oct 2025, 03:23

This one is tough! I couldn't handle the quick time events. Maybe because I'm playing on a trackpad. It was a cool concept but now all I can hear are birds chirping

ugly_robot7 Oct 2025, 21:50

This was great! Loved the bird noises and especially the fashionable mr pidgeon! Surprisingly scary to have the cuckoo bird show up! Good job

ellaris8 Oct 2025, 11:24

Interesting experience, I liked meeting the various characters and options for each location.
- The button pressing seemed to make the text box change size, but then the buttons seemed to appear in the exact same space?
- The final image seemed to have all possible loot and not only the ones collected, it would be cool to only show the items collected.

Vladislav19418 Oct 2025, 12:10

Круто интересно

YurisCat8 Oct 2025, 13:56

A very interesting game! I really enjoyed the various mini-game segments within it. Creating such mini-games within a dialogue framework requires a lot of creativity! The character illustrations are also super cute, haha! I love your game.

sick machine8 Oct 2025, 14:36

A cute and funny game. It's nice to meet someone who made a game purely on Twine.
The variety is also pleasing. The atmosphere is well-conveyed.
I'd like to see a "Restart" button or something like that at the end of the game.

LesDremlet11 Oct 2025, 10:19

This is a hilarious game, buddy!
I don't usually play visual novels, but I just couldn't resist this one.
I especially enjoyed dodging the cat and cutting the fishing line hahah!
It's a shame there's no music in the game, it would really add to the experience.
And I got the good ending on my second try ; )

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