I haven't seen many html5 entries, and thus dunno what exactly is possible with the tech, but the entry looked like few web pages... Nice graphics though.
Really nice art. It's not super fancy but I really like the perspective and the style in general. The writing was excellent and it was overall a fun read. I wonder how many endings and branches there are.
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Jani Nykänen26 Aug 2015, 13:40
I like the graphics, they make the experience much better! One of the best text games made for this Ludum Dare.
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Mike Mezhenin26 Aug 2015, 16:07
Good writing, superb illustrations. This is the first Ludum Dare text game I've ever finished (and replayed two times).
Beautiful illustrations! I like the way you tied in a faux-achievement system to act as the conclusions to your stories too, makes each one feel less like a deadend and more like another small victory.
Well done! Nice drawings, many choices and much text. :)
At first, it is a bit hard to see what is important in the game, since there are many distractive elements around the game itself (the buttons, title, ChoiceScript link). Perhaps you could seperate the game more from these other elements?
An interesting little game. Really interesting mechanics. Unfortunately the gameplay was a bit slow for me and the writing just slightly boring but good overall.
Reminds me of Monster Loves You. It's nice. My only complaint is we have to scroll a lot. We would be nice to find away to fit everything in one screen
Yeah, I agree, but choicescript is not built for pictures. Using smaller images is the best way to correct the scrolling issue. I will do that in the future.
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The writing was excellent and it was overall a fun read. I wonder how many endings and branches there are.
At first, it is a bit hard to see what is important in the game, since there are many distractive elements around the game itself (the buttons, title, ChoiceScript link). Perhaps you could seperate the game more from these other elements?