Immortals (and Mr Pickles)

by voxel
Overall★★★★★★★★★★3.25
Fun★★★★★★★★★★3.25
Innovation★★★★★★★★★★2.62
Theme★★★★★★★★★★4.38
Humor★★★★★★★★★★4.25
Mood★★★★★★★★★★3.88
A short, barely interactive story 'game' made by the beach, using Twine

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Tools: Twine

Comments5

garygreen
garygreen14 Aug 2018, 17:15
I loved the humour in this fun piece of interactive fiction. Made me laugh out loud on the train. Nice work. :)
knarf
knarf15 Aug 2018, 10:25
Awesome to see you deploy your writting abilities and humor in a text game :) It's really nicely written, fun, like what I think of a good short novel. I didn't explore all the possilities in narration yet but I'll sure come back to it later. At begining I almost felt sad for the dog thinking it might really be your dog.

That's a very good use of the theme and has an original content (as usual). Also GG for the reference to the only and only one good "metal" cartoon. GOOD BOY. Great !

Hope you're doing fine,

Cheers!
g1234517 Aug 2018, 14:16
That was a pretty funny story, and you've managed to help me solving a messy puzzle from another game. Yes, nice text game with some bonus points. ^_^
commanderstitch
commanderstitch20 Aug 2018, 02:56
wow. Super moody, and the best thing of all that i was wondering the entire time was: the money. It magically adjusted itself depending on which path you took. HA! nice! and then the nice twist at the end. Who'd have saw it coming?
Aurel300
Aurel30021 Aug 2018, 12:52
> wait a year

I found it interesting how the feeling of a dystopia could be felt from the very first lines, even before the catastrophe happened. What a sad, sad little world.

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